Spring Beauty and the Beast

Spring Beauty and the Beast 

Tenderly Spring sends harbingers of beauty,
Knights errant of crocus and snowdrops,
To warm winter’s shopworn heart
And soothe his brittle bones of barren boughs
With balms of long jonquil sunbeams
Melting the grumpy curmudgeon’s stronghold,
As pussy willows decorate his solstice doldrums
She watches snowflakes skate across thawing ponds.

Spring sends a redwing blackbird song
To lift Winter’s decrepit heart
In shy rhapsodies of new butterflies and lady bugs
Engaging Winter’s gloomy frown 
Into transcendent blue-eyed welkins like Forget-Me-Nots
Then chants déjà vu in veils of daffodils
As spritely Sweet Peas adorn 
Winter’s faded doorstep.

Beauty soothes the beast
Touching the ice-blue armor of his heart
With Hyacinth whispers
And sighs of zephyrs like a fluffy Snowball;
In the Lilac scent of a new equinox
Winter dozes wrapped in Spring’s enchantment
As she sings lullabies of reminiscent hibernation
Until he strides past halcyon autumn shadows again.

2-24-23
Contest: In Bloom
Sponsor: Joseph May
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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George Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 9:56 PM
Hi Sam, each of your image is clothed in the livery of wonderful words and phrases like' winter's shopworn heart', its 'decript heart', rhapsodies of butterflies' 'brittle bones of barren boughs'...'halcyon autumn shadows' ! Who else can use such apt and choicest phrases! Every image is a poem in itself. I salute you dear poetess! Indeed to my FAVE
Pandit Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 11:09 AM
Harbinger of beauty, indeed! Delightful poem, Sam, dwelling in exuberance of spring. Much enjoyed the imagery. BIG congrats on your win.
May Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 4:37 PM
Congrats on your win Sam, Very nicely done
Kauffman Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 10:04 AM
Many thanks Joseph! Your contest encouraged so many wonderful poems. It is an honor to on the winners list. So grateful for your imaginative contest themes! Sending you all the blessings of spring blooms!
Goldsmith Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 8:45 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely story/write. I really enjoyed this one. Have a blessed day...............
Kauffman Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 10:06 AM
Thank you so much Paula! Had fun wandering through spring's garden as she soothes the winter beast into hibernation! Blessings to you!
Poet Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 6:23 PM
A lovely and well-crafted poem, Sam. Congratulations on your top-winning placement.
Kauffman Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 11:00 AM
Thank you Lassad! This theme with its emphasis on personification really brought out the creativity in so many PS poets! Had fun thinking about the relationship of winter and spring! Blessings of joy to you dear friend.
Proxenos Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 5:42 AM
Wow this poem is great Sam - I'm sure it will do exceptionally well in Joseph's contest, best wishes - I love the title and in the last stanza i adore your first two lines. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Kauffman Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 11:05 AM
Dear Friend, once again I find myself asking for your forgiveness for my very tardy response to your lovely, and inspiring, feedback. Your messages always lift my spirits like a warm spring day. I am so happy that this poem brought you joy. Love working with personification. Hope you are well. Happy Lent! Sending you blessings of springtime joy, and a hug, even though you are experiencing autumn in all of its glory!
Sands Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 5:23 AM
Excellent ! We'll written. I enjoyed this :)
Kauffman Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 10:19 AM
Hi Heidi! Thank you for your encouraging feedback! Hope it brought a little peek at spring in the middle of winter. So glad it brought you joy! Blessings and continued prayers. Happy Spring!
Nuwas Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 11:21 PM
Beautiful poetry, I often feel like both beauty and the beast.
Kauffman Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 10:17 AM
Thank you so much Aysha! I think we all feel like a winter beast at times then like spritely spring. Great observation! All the best!
Roper Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 8:39 PM
Wow! amazing poem, Sam. full of imagery and feeling. A sure a first place win.
Kauffman Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 10:15 AM
Hi Eve! Your lovely feedback lifted my heart like a warm spring day! Thank you! So glad you enjoyed this one. Hope you are well. Sending you spring blessings of renewal.
M  Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 8:20 PM
Great poem Sam beautiful imagery! Debx
Kauffman Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 10:13 AM
Thank you so much Deb. Springtime just overflows with striking images as new life transitions from winter to spring. So much fun thinking about the relationship, like brother and sister, between the two seasons! Blessings of a joyful spring to you!
Faulkner Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 4:10 PM
Clever metaphor of gentle Spring soothing savage Winter, love your colorful images like 'spritely Sweet Peas' and 'Lilac scent of a new equinox' - I am ready for her!
Kauffman Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 10:09 AM
Hi Michelle! Can you tell how far behind I am on answering emails? Thank you so much my friend for your feedback. You always go to the heart of a poem and see the magic in the words. Sending you blessings of springtime joy!
Turner Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 2:33 PM
After reading this, it feels like spring is here already, Sam. Nicely penned for a win. Good luck.
Kauffman Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 10:02 AM
Hi Daniel! Thank you so much! It was fun to picture the relationship between such "polar" opposites, winter and spring, as spring coaxes "the beast" to rest. Hope you are well. Blessings!
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