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spring bamboo windchimes carouse gently in the breeze ~ damselfly finds mate AP: 2nd place 2021, 3rd place 2021 Submitted on March 27, 2021 for contest SPRING HAIKU sponsored by TANIA KITCHIN

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Date: 3/31/2021 8:38:00 AM
Ahh!!! I do enjoy the sound of bamboo windchimes blowing in a breeze. Reads like a winner to me. Your presence at my work is very supportive. Sara
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Date: 4/1/2021 7:01:00 AM
Thanks, Sara ~ most appreciated
Date: 3/30/2021 6:14:00 AM
It looks like an excerpt from a wonderful Chinese song with its wind over bamboo where the maiden meets the young man and initiates great love ... salute alkas
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Date: 3/30/2021 9:39:00 AM
What a wonderful comment. Thanks, Alkas ~
Date: 3/30/2021 3:45:00 AM
This is exquisite, especially the last line.
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Date: 3/30/2021 6:03:00 AM
thank you very much, Caren ~
Date: 3/29/2021 8:41:00 PM
Ah, pictured just right, Line! Bravo, Gershon
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Date: 3/30/2021 6:03:00 AM
Thanks, Gershon ~
Date: 3/29/2021 7:25:00 PM
Great imagery ....love the sounds of bamboo windchimes, my sister in-law next door has a few and so lovely.
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Date: 3/30/2021 6:04:00 AM
absolutely, thanks, Eve ~
Date: 3/29/2021 4:09:00 AM
Outstanding write. Looks like a contender for the contest.
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Date: 3/29/2021 7:36:00 AM
thanks for your visit and comment, Robert ~
Date: 3/28/2021 9:21:00 PM
Brilliant, love it.
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Date: 3/28/2021 10:18:00 PM
Thanks, Harry. Much appreciated ~
Date: 3/28/2021 1:32:00 PM
I love your KU's. I really really do!
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Date: 3/28/2021 1:45:00 PM
thanks, Andrea. I really really thank you. LOL Hugs xx
Date: 3/28/2021 11:24:00 AM
- Excellently written, Line ... I bet on this one :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/28/2021 1:46:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine
Date: 3/28/2021 7:23:00 AM
Oh nice one Line. Love this. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/28/2021 7:33:00 AM
thanks, Judy
Date: 3/28/2021 6:21:00 AM
Love the sound they make line, so soothing like running water. Hope your weekend is going well and good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 3/28/2021 6:36:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. Most appreciated.