Spring Bamboo

spring bamboo windchimes
carouse gently in the breeze
~ damselfly finds mate



AP: 2nd place 2021, 3rd place 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kendrick Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 8:38 AM
Ahh!!! I do enjoy the sound of bamboo windchimes blowing in a breeze. Reads like a winner to me. Your presence at my work is very supportive. Sara
Gauthier Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 7:01 AM
Thanks, Sara ~ most appreciated
Poetry Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 6:14 AM
It looks like an excerpt from a wonderful Chinese song with its wind over bamboo where the maiden meets the young man and initiates great love ... salute alkas
Gauthier Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 9:39 AM
What a wonderful comment. Thanks, Alkas ~
Krutsinger Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 3:45 AM
This is exquisite, especially the last line.
Gauthier Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 6:03 AM
thank you very much, Caren ~
Wolf Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 8:41 PM
Ah, pictured just right, Line! Bravo, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 6:03 AM
Thanks, Gershon ~
Roper Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 7:25 PM
Great imagery ....love the sounds of bamboo windchimes, my sister in-law next door has a few and so lovely.
Gauthier Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 6:04 AM
absolutely, thanks, Eve ~
Pettit Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 4:09 AM
Outstanding write. Looks like a contender for the contest.
Gauthier Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 7:36 AM
thanks for your visit and comment, Robert ~
Horsman Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 9:21 PM
Brilliant, love it.
Gauthier Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 10:18 PM
Thanks, Harry. Much appreciated ~
Dietrich Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 1:32 PM
I love your KU's. I really really do!
Gauthier Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 1:45 PM
thanks, Andrea. I really really thank you. LOL Hugs xx
Andresen Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 11:24 AM
- Excellently written, Line ... I bet on this one :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 1:46 PM
Thank you, Sunshine
Ball Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 7:23 AM
Oh nice one Line. Love this. God Bless, JB
Gauthier Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 7:33 AM
thanks, Judy
Cunningham Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 6:21 AM
Love the sound they make line, so soothing like running water. Hope your weekend is going well and good luck in the contest. Tom
Gauthier Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 6:36 AM
Thanks, Tom. Most appreciated.
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