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Spring : Disappearing

"Beauty of spring I read, when I look out only buildings and shop I see"" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Spring, is a season of beginning and birth New born leaves, flowers, fruits and green surroundings Warm sun, cool breeze, a season of joy and mirth Fluttering beauties, chirping resounding Long walks in garden, happiness no dearth Watching birds lay eggs, young ones astounding Festivals, love and joyous celebration Time to stay outdoor, enjoy creation No big trees in town, birds fly in despair No place to lay eggs, nowhere to build nest Many birds extinct, bare surrounds I stare Viewing trees, plants, flowers, fruits, nests my quest They're found only in parks gives me a scare No spring, no joy, no life, I am distressed Let's do something before it goes out of hand Already we have done much damage to land While you enjoy spring in all its glory Think of what coming generation will see They will be only reading it in story Will surely say, "Why you did not foresee? You wrote, why you didn't create a furore? Fresh air was depleting you can't disagree". To avert further damage, let's all join hands Along with writing, work to increase green lands _____________________________________________ 22nd February 2021 NA Written for Spring poetry contest Sponsored by Regina McIntosh Syllable count checked at HMS Rhymes checked at Rhyme Zone

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Date: 2/23/2021 9:25:00 AM
This is such a meaningful poem dear Rama... I love spring and just wish to see more spring seasons bringing cheer to our lives.. you managed to write three octaves... I didn't have patience and wrote only one octave... Lol... Hugs dear... Gn ~ Ani
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/23/2021 9:31:00 AM
Writing 3 took some time. I love spring season, wanted to convey a message so did three. I have a new tablet. It has split screen facility, on one side syllable counter, other side rhyme zone. It becomes easier. Good night. Take care, Rama
Date: 2/23/2021 6:47:00 AM
WOW!! Rama, what a beautiful meaningful spring poem...
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/23/2021 7:07:00 AM
Thanks for your WoW and wonderful comments. I love spring season for all it offers. Spring and flowers and birds should never disappear. Have a wonderful day ahead Akkina. Take care, Rama
Date: 2/22/2021 11:05:00 PM
The forget me not will soon be in bloom :) ~~
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/23/2021 2:12:00 AM
Of course, but for many, they would have to walk a bit to see it. Gardens and greens are depleting. Thanks for commenting again. Have a blessed day ahead. Take care, Rama
Date: 2/22/2021 5:09:00 PM
A beautiful Ottava rima poem Rama, we must do all we can to repair the damage mankind has done to the land... Belle
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/23/2021 2:10:00 AM
I am planning to buy few plants and take care of them. Flowers are a beauty to watch. Thanks for your wonderful comments. Have a great day ahead. Take care, Rama
Date: 2/22/2021 3:45:00 PM
praying that will will soon enjoy some of which is promised here, thank you for sharing your talent today,
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/23/2021 2:08:00 AM
You are welcome mystic rose, don't just pray, see what you can do, maybe plant a tree, or a buy few flowering plants. Thanks for your visit and uplifting comments. Enjoy your day. Take care, Rama
Date: 2/22/2021 1:15:00 PM
Rama, the beauty of your "Primavera" poem is only matched by the the towering need to save our planet . I could not agree with you more!!
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/23/2021 2:05:00 AM
We poets are lovers of nature. We should do something even if it is in a small way. Many drops make an ocean. Thanks for your uplifting comments. Enjoy your day. Take care, Rama
Date: 2/22/2021 11:00:00 AM
That is an equisite description of spring. So much meaningful imagery.
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/23/2021 2:03:00 AM
WoW! What a wonderful comment. Thanks Victor. Have a great day ahead. Take care, Rama

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