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Spring Stream

SPRING STREAM Sun be-gifts his daughter running through the morning cold : Her fresh-washed charm is a girl in her first dress of spring. Dawn draws the purple veil from the sky, flooding the stream with gold, And diamonds of the first water, urging her to laugh and dance and swing. Free at last to run on her joyful way to the ocean, she starts to sing. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Written for Francine Roberts' Contest "Wow Me in 5 Lines"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/27/2011 4:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Sydney. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2011 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Sydney in Francine's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/25/2011 8:03:00 AM
Congrats Syd on your featured poem this week on P.S. .. a wonderful one to share with us all my friend with luv..
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Date: 4/25/2011 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Sydney
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Date: 4/24/2011 8:12:00 AM
Congrats Sydney on your 2nd place win with this very beautiful depiction of stream..Love,Gautami
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Date: 4/24/2011 8:03:00 AM
So lovely and uplifting is this wonderful poem!! Congratulations on a well deserved win!! :)
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Date: 4/24/2011 6:40:00 AM
a round of cheers for this winnning piece, syd... more power to you!:) huggs!
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Date: 4/24/2011 6:40:00 AM
Go Syd! HUZZAH on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/24/2011 12:08:00 AM
Such imagery, Sydney. a very well deserved win.
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Date: 4/23/2011 9:38:00 PM
Great to see you at the top again Sydney. Congratulations on your second spot. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/23/2011 7:06:00 PM
Provacatively beautiful words. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/23/2011 6:38:00 PM
Stunning images Sydney, congratulations on your win ;)
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Date: 4/23/2011 6:28:00 PM
Beautiful images of your daughter, Syd. Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/23/2011 6:15:00 PM
congrats Sydney on your second place win in the Wow Me contest, love this , you always flow so melodically
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Date: 4/20/2011 11:37:00 AM
WOW!!! Stunningly beautiful write.just loved this sooomuch Sydney.Good luck in the contest.Love,Gautami
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