Spring

Oh the beauty it will bring. The air will be filled with the fragrance from the beautiful budding flowers and trees. The sweet smell from an early morning rain, that is cleaning the air. I enjoy hearing the birds singing from their choir loft tree branches. All will be singing in perfect heavenly harmony. The days start off with cool mornings until the bright sun rolls out of bed. The warmth of the day's sun will put a smile on everyone's face. Oh Spring how I wish you would stay all year. "Coming" will not last long turning into Summer Date Written: 2/8/2023

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FJ Thomas

Date: 2/25/2023 7:18:00 PM

You summed the beauty of Spring perfectly in this Haibun Paula... the final statement the depressing truth. Well, for this far south anyway lol

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/26/2023 7:48:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this Spring write. I love Spring. I wish it would last longer. Have a wonderful/fun day writing away..............

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/13/2023 4:05:00 AM

I do like spring except for the allergies that go along with it. It is a beautiful time with good weather(mostly). Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/13/2023 1:09:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my Spring write. Yes, it can bring on allergies and they are no fun to have. Have a wonderful/fun day writing away.........................

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/12/2023 2:31:00 PM

So true and well crafted of spring time.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/13/2023 1:08:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this fun Spring write. Have a wonderful/fun day writing away.........................

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/8/2023 2:46:00 PM

Beautiful Paula. Nice thoughts :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/9/2023 12:55:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my Spring write. It is gone way toooooo fast. It needs to last longer. Have a wonderful/fun day writing away.........................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/8/2023 12:16:00 PM

- Spring is beautiful ... and ditto for your poem, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/9/2023 12:53:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Yes, Spring is a pretty time of the year. I love it. Wish it would last longer. Hugs... Have a wonderful/fun day writing away.........................