Spring

Long winter nights left me in deep despair,
aroused before the dawn so many times,
in concert with the mantel clock whose chimes
informed and mocked, knowing that I was there.
Consciousness had become too hard to bear,
walls of pain with no lesser ones to climb,
each hour of sleep too short, each one sublime,
my threshold reached, sought refuge in a chair.
The bedspring in the mattress spear-like stood
uncoiled unlike the ranks in which it lay
a twisted Angel sent to do no good
to torture and torment me, and it would
I ordered a new mattress the next day
three months ago missus said that I should.

For contest 'Italian/Petrachan sonnet- Spring', sponsor Craig Cornish
March 14th 2018
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Cornish Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 10:11 AM
Still laughing Viv---a talented and humorous pen for sure,--Had to read it three times.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 4:13 AM
Congratulations on your win, Viv.
Wigley Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 7:06 AM
Thanks Subimal, much appreciated. Viv
Gentry Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 12:31 AM
Congratulations on your win with this different delightful sonnet.
Wigley Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 7:06 AM
Thanks Susan, very kind. Viv x
Gondolf Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 5:49 AM
Viv, enjoyed your poem on "spring." Very different than all the others. Congrats on your win. John
Wigley Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 7:07 AM
Thanks, John, my variation on a theme was a gamble, but Craig was very forgiving. Regards, Viv
George   Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 3:26 AM
Well done and so original, Viv. Many congrats on your fine win. Sincerely, Elaine George
Wigley Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 7:08 AM
Thanks Elaine, well done you too! x
Roper Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 8:48 PM
Congratulations on your win, Viv, wonderful write and imagery ! Hugs Eve~`*
Wigley Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 1:25 AM
Thanks Eve, sleeping much better now. Viv x
Carmack Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 5:22 PM
I like this, congrats Viv.
Wigley Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 1:26 AM
Thanks Rob, much appreciated. Regards, Viv
Gauthier Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 4:24 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Viv. Beautifully penned.
Wigley Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 1:26 AM
Thanks Line, surprised myself x
Gentry Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 3:42 PM
Holy Moly!! I was feeling so sorry for you, then had an inkling and sure enough. Still very well written and delightful too. Good luck in the contest. Should be at the top.
Callus Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 6:31 AM
A most enjoyable sonnet, Viv, written with a delightful witty pen. If it's of any comfort to you, you're not the only 'stubborn' person to endure discomfort! I've been through it as well. At present there's a mattress advert showing on Maltese telly, based very much on what you have written here! Regards // paul
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March 15, 2018 at 4:00 PM
You had me ewing and awing, ready to bow to your poetically emotional depth, to fav this that I might savor the imagery of every line over and over, I was enraptured and well captured until I feel asleep. Seriously, Viv - I do love your serious pen, but equal is my love of your wit and the combination - well can perfection be any nearer than this? Applause, you sure played with my heart and captured my "ah, man - didn't see that coming" Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Leiser Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 11:19 PM
Perfect, Viv!! Great Italian sonnet ;-)
Wigley Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 3:14 AM
Thanks Laura, and bless your eyesight x
Pandit Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 12:07 PM
You write Sonnet poetry with authenticity--enjoyed reading your poem Viv. Fun ending!
Wigley Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 8:11 PM
Thanks, Vijay, a different take on theme, by a technicality. Regards, Viv
Gauthier Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 10:35 AM
No wonder you couldn't sleep..."a twisted Angel sent to do no good". A delightful poem, Viv.
Wigley Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 8:12 PM
My sympathy goes to any victim of the rampant bed spring, Line. Thanks x
Cunningham Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 8:50 AM
Lol, you had me there Viv, I was thinking bluebells. I too have been a victim still got the scar somewhere. Good luck. Tom
Wigley Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 8:13 PM
Ouch! Wear it with pride, fellow somnambulist. Regards, Viv
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