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Brave of heart too wilt, at cosmic egg’s split, as one becomes two, that bliss beats renew. Force of the bliss gale, is no fairy tale; love knocks on our door, piercing every pore. Hiranyagarbha: mystic enigma, lies within our head; splits when ego’s dead. To garner the truth, do go in forsooth, if we dare to leap, in the void to seek. When soul has risen, within body prism, the cosmic egg sprouts, if we’re free from doubts. Polarities thus, aboard God’s bliss bus, descend to the heart, adding love to cart. One to two, then one; union births the sun, love’s magnetic pulse, everywhere at once. The prerequisite for God to visit, is that heart be pure, sans worldly allure. 01-June-2022 Notes: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hiranyagarbha https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/World_egg This or That, Vol 12 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 7/2/2022 5:27:00 PM
Absolutely superb, Seeker:-) I love this poem and really liked the form you used. Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Date: 7/2/2022 6:44:00 PM
So happy you enjoyed, Edward. Thank you for hosting and for the recognition! Always a pleasure to participate in your contests
Date: 7/2/2022 11:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Creative" write/picture. Have a blessed/weekend writing away....................
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Date: 7/2/2022 6:43:00 PM
Thank you, Paula! :)
Date: 6/1/2022 6:41:00 PM
I love your take on the subject you've chosen, US, and it was beautifully structured, all the best my friend, Aloha~William
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Date: 6/1/2022 6:54:00 PM
Thank you, William! I do like this compact Jueju form. Since Hiranyagarbha is a somewhat esoteric truth, I’ve added some notes from Wiki, which provides a sketchy overview.

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