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Splashing Dog

(This is a Tanka: Japanese poem of five lines, the first and third composed of five syllables and the others seven. In Japanese, tanka is often written in one straight line, but in English and other languages, we usually divide the lines into the five syllabic units: 5-7-5-7-7.) Splashing Dog by Amy Swanson Great drops of water fly vigorously from him! Black hair glistening he gallops through the river, stops only to shake himself!

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Date: 2/20/2009 4:09:00 PM
Amy, thanks for explaining the difference between Japanese and English tankas. And "tanka" you for sharing this image. When dogs shake themselves, they sure do get everyone and everything around them wet! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/8/2009 11:16:00 AM
Another wonderfully written piece from you my friend. Love the images in this piece.
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Date: 2/8/2009 9:30:00 AM
well penned, nicely done.. and I think I'm a little smarter today thank you so much for sharing :)
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Date: 2/8/2009 8:53:00 AM
Beautifully written. Déirdre Ó Maidín
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Date: 2/8/2009 8:45:00 AM
Excellent! I just gave my dog a bath and he always shakes himself while he is still in the water soaking me! Love the imagery in this well written Tanka. Love, Shar
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