Splash

It was the only fine day during a week
near Ullapool; a chance to launch for a sail.
Out off the Summer Isles a breeze we did seek,
being relieved there was no longer a gale.

Then half a mile to the north a splash we saw.
Was it? Might it be? Could one be found right here?
Then up came a spout and we were filled with awe.
Another one confirmed that it might come near.

We looked at each other – should we be afraid?
Around us there were guillemots, razor bills
and puffins, yet not one of them seemed dismayed,
so we relaxed and anticipated thrills.

So towards us it swam, breaking the surface,
spouting again, till it was just over there,
some sixty feet distant. No longer nervous
we reckoned its length to our boat did compare.

And so it passed south as we were held in wonder.
Ashore we determined the species of whale
was a minke, sure it could not be under
sixteen feet. I recount this memorable tale.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 12:30 PM
Hello Lisle, you did a great job creating this poem. As i was reading I felt that I was part of this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
Ryder Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 4:40 PM
Thanks Darlene, It was a great day and experience I just had to share.
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