Spit

He looked him in the eye and then 
He tilted his head to one side and spit
Inched a little closer in defiance
Knowing he took a chance on getting hit

Forty six feet isn’t that long a distance
Listening to what the voice behind him said
He took the first one just looking
The second went whizzing past his head

Composed like he had ice in his veins
He moved out and back in and then
He stared down at him forty six feet away
Tilted his head and spit again

The scene was tense as he stood and waited
He knew he was under the gun
One in the dirt and one under his chin
Now the count was three and one

He began to feel a little nervous
But thought this is no time to quit
So he banged the plate stared at him again
Tilted his head and spit

It was down the middle like a gift
The moment, it was tense
He heard the crack, he opened his eyes
And watched it sailing over the fence

He was rounding third and coming home
Arms raised like he’d struck gold
Crowd was cheering, a dream come true
Not bad for a ten year old.


   If you love baseball, attend your
Local Little League games.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Strand Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 1:22 AM
Congrats on your success in Matt's contest Vinbce.Rgds Brian
Guzzi Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 2:35 PM
wonderful, precious...loved it! Congrad's...You've got mail...please jopin in on my blog we're writing a story just for Rhonda Hero to help her heal. Light & Love
Richards Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 1:17 PM
I feel like I was watching it all happen!! Congratulations on this winning poem, Vince!! ~ Great job! ~Carrie
Strand Avatar
June 20, 2009 at 1:19 AM
Best wishes with this one Vince.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome blog comments
Al-Riyami Avatar
June 17, 2009 at 7:34 AM
This is A Terrif Scene:D
Poe Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 9:10 PM
Wow I was thrown off at first...Sweet poem. -Alley
Richards Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 4:57 PM
Oh wow...this was fun to read!! Felt like I was witness to the whole scene...can almost see the dust fly when he slides into home plate!! Yes...we used to cheer on our son in little league...now our grandson...how time did fly !! love to see those kids play! Loved this Vince!! :)
Winter Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 1:17 PM
Wow. Like being there. Awesome write. I never understood the spitting thing (chewing tobacco or just spit?), as it seriously grosses me out ~lol~ but who cares, the game is great! My daughter used to play as a kid - it was pure joy watching her. This is a winner! Good luck! Love, Shar
Buys Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 1:14 PM
Ah Vince, while reading I was all over the place, cowboy story, school bully and then you floor me with the ending, lol. Can you tell I don't know much about baseball? Beautiful write and very well written. Made me smile. Love Heidie
Goff Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 1:03 PM
just smilin' enjoying this well-put-together rhyme, Vince, flows like a "river of gold" nice work! Jim
Rhinem Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 10:49 AM
Smile~What a beautiful trek down the innocent trail of memories road...."Hello My Priceless & Blessed Friend, Vincent Suzadail Jr.!!!":):)~I hope that life has been treating "You & Your Loves" wonderfully!!?~And I truly enjoyed "Your Fabulous Write" here; it is "Perfect!!!":):)~"My Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Your Loves,' Forever, John!!"~"Have A Very Beautiful Day Vincent!!!":):) Bye ~
Jordan Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 10:43 AM
I'm just starting my daughter in tee-ball and she loves it - Wonderful poem Vince my friend, I for one loved every word, God Bless, MJ
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