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He looked him in the eye and then He tilted his head to one side and spit Inched a little closer in defiance Knowing he took a chance on getting hit Forty six feet isn’t that long a distance Listening to what the voice behind him said He took the first one just looking The second went whizzing past his head Composed like he had ice in his veins He moved out and back in and then He stared down at him forty six feet away Tilted his head and spit again The scene was tense as he stood and waited He knew he was under the gun One in the dirt and one under his chin Now the count was three and one He began to feel a little nervous But thought this is no time to quit So he banged the plate stared at him again Tilted his head and spit It was down the middle like a gift The moment, it was tense He heard the crack, he opened his eyes And watched it sailing over the fence He was rounding third and coming home Arms raised like he’d struck gold Crowd was cheering, a dream come true Not bad for a ten year old. If you love baseball, attend your Local Little League games.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/11/2009 1:22:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Matt's contest Vinbce.Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/10/2009 2:35:00 PM
wonderful, precious...loved it! Congrad's...You've got mail...please jopin in on my blog we're writing a story just for Rhonda Hero to help her heal. Light & Love
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Date: 7/10/2009 1:17:00 PM
I feel like I was watching it all happen!! Congratulations on this winning poem, Vince!! ~ Great job! ~Carrie
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Date: 6/20/2009 1:19:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Vince.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome blog comments
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Date: 6/17/2009 7:34:00 AM
This is A Terrif Scene:D
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Date: 6/15/2009 9:10:00 PM
Wow I was thrown off at first...Sweet poem. -Alley
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Date: 6/15/2009 4:57:00 PM
Oh wow...this was fun to read!! Felt like I was witness to the whole scene...can almost see the dust fly when he slides into home plate!! Yes...we used to cheer on our son in little league...now our grandson...how time did fly !! love to see those kids play! Loved this Vince!! :)
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Date: 6/15/2009 1:17:00 PM
Wow. Like being there. Awesome write. I never understood the spitting thing (chewing tobacco or just spit?), as it seriously grosses me out ~lol~ but who cares, the game is great! My daughter used to play as a kid - it was pure joy watching her. This is a winner! Good luck! Love, Shar
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Date: 6/15/2009 1:14:00 PM
Ah Vince, while reading I was all over the place, cowboy story, school bully and then you floor me with the ending, lol. Can you tell I don't know much about baseball? Beautiful write and very well written. Made me smile. Love Heidie
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Date: 6/15/2009 1:03:00 PM
just smilin' enjoying this well-put-together rhyme, Vince, flows like a "river of gold" nice work! Jim
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Date: 6/15/2009 10:49:00 AM
Smile~What a beautiful trek down the innocent trail of memories road...."Hello My Priceless & Blessed Friend, Vincent Suzadail Jr.!!!":):)~I hope that life has been treating "You & Your Loves" wonderfully!!?~And I truly enjoyed "Your Fabulous Write" here; it is "Perfect!!!":):)~"My Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Your Loves,' Forever, John!!"~"Have A Very Beautiful Day Vincent!!!":):) Bye ~
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Date: 6/15/2009 10:43:00 AM
I'm just starting my daughter in tee-ball and she loves it - Wonderful poem Vince my friend, I for one loved every word, God Bless, MJ
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