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July-1-2025
Spiritual Gem Inside Me Poetry Contest
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Spiritual Gem

Within me lies a gem, priceless like a diamond
But sad it doesn’t glitter as it is almost dormant.
It lies hidden from view, covered in grime and dust
Once polished, it will shine lustrous, rid of all dirt.

Time and neglect have more or less dimmed it
It needs urgent scrubbing and cleansing, I must admit
With ardent effort, its sheen can once more be restored
Grace me to polish it and make it shine, my Lord.

I know, my body is meant to be the living temple of God
It should be built in bricks of love and gilded in gold
May the light in me shine, even in the thick of night
And stay as a beacon when darkness swallows light.

Oh Lord, make my heart, your sacred shrine
So that in your holy sanctum, I can dine.
Awaken my heart to always sing your praise.
From all wicked temptations, my soul, you raise.

Amid the din and cacophony of the world,
The cravings of my soul go ignored and cold.
I know, if I dare to listen in stillness and silence
I would hear the soft murmurs of my soul in clearness. 

My soul should sparkle like the sheen of a sapphire
But its glow and glitter are often veiled by a blur.
All I strive is to make the gem within me shine brilliant
And make my spiritual journey speedier and triumphant.
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Date: 7/16/2025 10:42:00 AM
You are a gem, Valsa. Your poem is a great entry for the contest. Best wishes! My favorite lines were, "May the light in me shine, even in the thick of night And stay as a beacon when darkness swallows light." My wish too, my dear friend. Hugs, Bill
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Date: 7/15/2025 9:38:00 AM
Your shining soul lights the dark. So lovely Valsa. :)
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Date: 7/11/2025 2:59:00 PM
Making me wonder. Is this her muse she's painting as a jewel.
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Date: 7/3/2025 1:46:00 PM
Such a humble, poetic Psalm Valsa. You're a special lady
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Date: 7/3/2025 1:22:00 PM
"May the light in me shine, even in the thick of night And stay as a beacon of hope when darkness swallows" -- powerful affirmation! "All I strive is to make the gem within me shine brilliant And make my spiritual journey speedier and triumphant." Amen! A worthy goal for all of us to follow. Great read!
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Date: 7/3/2025 12:30:00 PM
Dearest Valsa, you always sparkle with shining faith. What a beautiful plea straight from your diamond heart! I am deeply touched by your faithful journey and your desire to dust and polish your sacred gem. This poem is a triumph! Best wishes for the contest, dear friend after all, as the song says, "Diamonds are a girl's best friend" and yours shines!
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