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Spider-Man Blanket Pov: a Poem

When will you need me again? I know I am your security when you're in faraway lands, But when will you go out again? When will you notice me here? Laying on the floor, under the bed. I hear your footsteps every morning and every night. But when will I see you again? When will you realize you're me? Ignored, forgotten, missed, claimed to be deeply loved. I know you did not put me in this place. And I know you did not put yourself in your place. But when will you see we are the same and deserve better? (08/05/22) Emotion: Despair Strong Emotions Poetry Contest (9th Place) Sponsored by: Emile Pinet

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/31/2022 9:14:00 PM

This is excellent Jasmine. So happy to see it on the winner’s list. Congratulations. Blessings xxoo

Terry Miller

Date: 8/31/2022 5:37:00 AM

A wonderful poem, Jasmine congratulations.

Jasmine Trombone
Date: 8/31/2022 4:06:00 PM

Thank you so much Terry!!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/30/2022 2:32:00 PM

Love this Jasmine. Congratulations on your win! Linda

Jasmine Trombone
Date: 8/31/2022 4:05:00 PM

Thank you, Linda! That means a lot!

Emile Pinet

Date: 8/30/2022 11:26:00 AM

Congratulations Jasmine! Your poem "Spider-Man Blanket", earned you a distinguished place in my contest, this contest had 100 poems entered but your poem rose to the top ten, you should be proud of this accomplishment, this was a hard contest to judge, yet your poem caught my eye, well done my friend, Emile.

Jasmine Trombone
Date: 8/30/2022 11:42:00 AM

Thank you, Emile! It means a lot that it caught the eye of someone so esteemed. Thank you again!