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What happens when someone falls out of love? Is there a single, frozen in amber, sanctimonious moment when you decide you’re too good for whomever - the falling-out moment - where imperfections are revealed like a magic trick? “Huh,” you find yourself saying, “Weren’t you cuter, half-an-hour ago? Or is it a slow, drip, drip, drip Chinese-water-torture-like seepage? Maybe breakups are written in the stars, you know, Mercury drifts into retrograde and suddenly there’s empty air where your lover used to be. I’m not in a breakup, but I like to be prepared - these are just questions. like Isn’t every male whale a sperm whale? . . A song for this: If I Didn't Have You (Live) by Tim Minchin

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Date: 7/24/2024 2:53:00 PM
You certainly ask all the right questions Anais, and yes I’m afraid one size does fit all, especially with sperm whales that gooey stuff actually grows on their heads, Insofar as love is concerned I don’t think you can be prepared, so best enjoy it while it lasts, cheers David
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Date: 7/24/2024 1:16:00 PM
I think the only way to be sure in the absolute is to do some personal hands on research. I would skip the orcas though. Nasty tempers
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Anais Vionet
Date: 7/24/2024 2:08:00 PM
I’m looking for answers - not volunteering to research it myself - where’s the summer-lazy in THAT?
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Date: 7/24/2024 1:30:00 PM
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