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Spellbound Seas

Raven seas, spellcast waves, ~ singing hate Revengeful tides, strum the seashores with soft cracklings, bleeding kohl ice. Smoked sienna soul ~ a cacophony, from vintage gold-vaults, shimmering with sighs, a saga unheard.

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Don Iannone

Date: 3/16/2024 12:50:00 PM

Hello Hiva, These words come to mind in reading your poem: Melancholy and unrest, as if standing at the edge of a tumultuous sea under a brooding sky, and beholding the tragic beauty in nature's at times virulent expressions. Best wishes, Don

Lisa Ricci

Date: 1/20/2024 8:03:00 AM

Good Morning Hiya. Good Morning. I found this extraordinary in its entirety starting with the title. Truly. I love the sea and have since I was a child and yes spellbound for certain. (smile) Entries and poetry such as this is why we read. Thank you for sharing your skilled talent and pen. Have a wonderful morning and weekend. Blessed are those who have the sea within their soul. Peace Blessings and Light always. (smile)

Joseph May

Date: 12/27/2023 3:09:00 PM

very nicely done Hiya, Congrats on your win

Valsa George

Date: 12/24/2023 11:16:00 PM

As ever your poem is too deep and more on the dark side. I can picture the sea which is raven black with the revengeful tides. l can hear the cacophony too. The 'smoked sienna soul' is an excellent usage....! Such matchless expressions make this poem stunningly beautiful . All the best Hiya!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/21/2023 6:15:00 PM

An intriguing and beautiful poem, with stunning, memorable imagery. My very best wishes, Evelyn

Tom Woody

Date: 12/20/2023 7:51:00 PM

This one feels dark and mysterious Hiya. Read several times trying to get a meaning but coming up short. Sometimes ambiguity can be a good thing though

Paige Hind

Date: 12/20/2023 6:05:00 PM

Deep, like the sea... the last stanza is 'spellbinding'- out of your vault. Gorgeous. :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/20/2023 3:29:00 PM

May your saga bring an orchestra of unheard music that can make even an angel dance, let alone two, nice one Hiya

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/20/2023 12:13:00 PM

Wonderfully expressive poem, Hiya. Much enjoyed the saga unheard shimmering with sighs.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/20/2023 10:46:00 AM

Creative and expressive for sure. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Sara K

Clive Culverhouse

Date: 12/20/2023 7:08:00 AM

A saga unheard, what a line, great read Hiya

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/20/2023 6:16:00 AM

Lovely and peaceful. Enjoyed each word,. God bless you friend. Love, Gina

Ink Empress

Date: 12/20/2023 6:15:00 AM

Ah where do i start praising this soul hitting poem that flows with such descriptive words and alliterations in such a seamless manner. I absolutely love the flow and how your opening lines are too. I am so familiar with raven seas singing hate , deluded spellbound! As revengeful tides come crashing strumming pearlescent seashores, untouched and serene, to disturb the peace..i lovee and we love this “ bleeding ice kohl” brilliant! And some sagas sincere and vintage from the deepest edges of

Ink Empress
Date: 12/20/2023 6:16:00 AM

Heart remains unheard unfortunately, i love the depth and powerful energy of this truly! And youv got syllables on point too. Goodluck for the contest