Speaking the Language

Lin, a Chinese friend giggled at my feeble, say,
pedestrian attempt at Cantonese,
the Chinese word for butterfly or dragon even moth 
just vanished down the throat of one
so eager yet befuddled,
turning egg shell noodles under spit fire lanterns,
our laughter rose and fell amid the sotto voce banter now in train.
Me, the woodland boffin, immersed in esoteric marshland plant life,
the sort that rules the grand designs of green leaf activists.
Lin, the restless late teen nomad,
who had yet to sink deep roots,
often dwelt in backstreet fruit and flora stalls.
On occasions even flexing sylvan muscles 
on craggy mountain tops.
 Her flawless English honed through years of rough sea ferry ventures,
on holidays abroad in trendy sunspots,
at major meadow festivals where gaiety and buzz words sprout.
We keep in touch through text and pen as often as we can.
Meeting up is fun.
I hope one day my knowledge of those mystic eastern tongues
 will stray beyond the basics of some tawdry travel phrase book, 
the one I’m prone to cart around the world but seldom use


       Contest : YOUR PERSONAL FAVOURITE

Date judged with N/A : 4 th August 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Dietrich Avatar
December 5, 2025 at 9:23 PM
This reminds me a bit of the three part narrative you posted recently. Two people who love writing. Well described here
La France Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 2:13 PM
Howard, congratulations on your win in my contest ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance
Mcconnell Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 1:19 PM
Nice pen Howard well told indeed with good imagery too. Have a great weekend, Gordon
Peck Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 4:45 PM
What an interesting story, written beautifully. At least you tried to speak Cantonese. That says a lot about your integrity.
Fowler Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 7:12 AM
I laugh, Howard, at carting around a travel phrase book that is seldom used. I once was that traveler and more than once dined on things I never thought I'd ordered. LOL Thankfully, I got smarter with age. A terrific poem of overcoming differences. Linda
Hankins Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 12:55 PM
Howard, this is beautiful...absolutely beautiful. I just finish my poem "The English Language Ain't Easy" so I was pleased to see your poem here. I love your word choices, your phrases, and your interest in Cantonese. Keep at it; keep writing!
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