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We entwine among boughs of leafy trees in graceful fluidity so evergreen... and whisper of love's harvest after gentle drawls rising with petals from coos of evening, when branches drape our secrets in glossed foil to amble on, beyond tremble of stars. Until midnight wraps our kisses in its cooling veil, thanking a god for breaths which drift into curled wanderings , to awaken us upon the scent of day's blossoms… lips stain teacup while gauzy air cuddles our ardent pledge, as we become one forest under our shade that I rest calmly knowing you are my home. -------- 8/11/2019 Contest of Lu Loo: My Home ------------ Re-post dated 02/01/ 2017

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Date: 8/21/2019 12:13:00 PM
Congratulations on a beautiful scene surrounding your home!
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Date: 8/20/2019 12:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely poem being honored with First Place! : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/20/2019 11:19:00 AM
Nette I can see why you got first!;)
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Date: 8/20/2019 10:18:00 AM
beautifully expressed sweet Nette, I am not surprised to see a top win from you, as always. Thank you for your participation and congrats on your placement. I was honored to read your poem :)-luloo
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Date: 2/5/2017 2:27:00 AM
Wonderful imagery and very romantic.
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Date: 2/4/2017 11:40:00 AM
Very nice, Nette Congratulations
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Date: 2/4/2017 4:22:00 AM
Passion flows...wow! Congrats nette on your win. :)
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Date: 2/3/2017 10:20:00 PM
A top-notch poem that exudes the bliss of romance so wonderfully. Amazing descriptions, Nette. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/3/2017 6:02:00 PM
beautiful work as usual nette, congrats on your win
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Date: 2/1/2017 3:51:00 PM
I agree with Demetrios. Truly enchanting and a sure bet to win her contest, Nette.
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Date: 2/1/2017 10:06:00 AM
Enchanting and majestic dear, Nette! A seven and good luck ! Hugs
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Date: 2/1/2017 4:11:00 AM
- A beautiful poem that fits perfectly for Valentine, Nette - Luck in the contest - happy hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/31/2017 11:17:00 PM
You speak clearly. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 1/31/2017 7:17:00 PM
I just love this, Nette! And I know it will do well in the contest!
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Date: 1/31/2017 6:52:00 PM
from one poet to another, I bow to you dear lady, with a smile..good luck
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Date: 1/31/2017 3:45:00 PM
Very beautiful nette
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Date: 1/31/2017 3:05:00 PM
So sweet and beautiful Where are all the romantic woman as you, all hiding? :)
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Date: 1/31/2017 1:44:00 PM
I have a big crush on your astounding poetry embracing love blooming like a balmy tree. Warmth pervades your writes always!
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Date: 1/31/2017 1:40:00 PM
nette, I only hope someday to be able to write in your style. Unique and poetic, simply beautiful:)
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Date: 1/31/2017 12:58:00 PM
This entire poem is beautiful but that last line Nette, just blew me away. "as we become one forest in rosette shade" Wow, incredible.
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