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Speaketh Not of Goodbye

My heart doth beat with rapid pounding beats My breath doth pant in deep and quick hot gasp To tell you of my love needs no repeats And to my bosom, close to me, I thee enclasp Fear not the dark and mist of any season Not to compare to summer’s rose that dies Shining bright the sun, love is the reason Speak not of grudging nor of sad goodbyes Our love must come in sips, time is the thief From love's sweet chalice do thy lips feel burned To quench my fill, each sip is sweet but brief Goodbye shall not besmirch our love I yearn To hold, to sip and drink your sweet hello My heart doth beat, each beat is yours you know. © 15/11/2012 Competition Entry

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Date: 12/3/2012 7:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in Harry's "Goodbye" contest Mandy. I am sorry it is late. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/3/2012 10:05:00 AM
Thanks Again Carol love xx
Date: 11/29/2012 5:40:00 PM
Awesome final line, each beat is yours. I just love that, mandy . Big congrats in Harry's first wonderful contest!!
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Date: 11/30/2012 1:22:00 AM
Thanks Andy xx
Date: 11/27/2012 4:40:00 PM
Great poem of goodbye. Congrts. on your win and thank you for reading mine. Many blessings. Lucilla
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Date: 11/28/2012 1:26:00 AM
Thanks Lucilla xx
Date: 11/27/2012 2:24:00 PM
Awesome and beautiful piece,Mandy..Congrats on your superb win...And thanks for all your wonderful comments on my works...You are so dear...
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Date: 11/28/2012 1:25:00 AM
Thank you Olsuegun, my comments on your work are well deserved my friend xx
Date: 11/27/2012 8:47:00 AM
Such progress in your writing! What a wonder you are! fav line [Our love must come in sips] Crongrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/27/2012 9:15:00 AM
I will take that as high praise and thank you for it Debbie, I try to learn from the masters, or the mistresses lol. Told you you were cool xx
Date: 11/27/2012 7:31:00 AM
Lovely work, Mandy, Congrats!! Jag
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Date: 11/27/2012 9:17:00 AM
Thanks again Jag, much appreciated xx
Date: 11/26/2012 9:23:00 PM
Mandy, , congratulations ;-) In Harry's "goodbye" contest.. Good night~ PD
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Date: 11/26/2012 6:47:00 PM
congrats on a great win Mandy
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Date: 11/27/2012 9:16:00 AM
Thanks Joseph, I appreciate that xx
Date: 11/26/2012 5:46:00 PM
Thee pen a great poem Mistress Mandy. Congrats....Sassy Seren.......
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Date: 11/27/2012 9:15:00 AM
Me thinks thee are a sassy wench xx
Date: 11/26/2012 4:41:00 PM
congrats Mandy on your 3rd place winner in my goodbye sonnet contest..
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Date: 11/27/2012 9:15:00 AM
Thanks harry for placing me xx
Date: 11/18/2012 9:53:00 AM
you've done it again another wonderful poem ...Seren
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Date: 11/18/2012 10:46:00 AM
Thanks Seren, you are a pal xx
Date: 11/18/2012 7:28:00 AM
A love poem to hold... very enjoyed... Happy Thanksgiving to you,, luv Michael
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Date: 11/18/2012 7:35:00 AM
Thanks Michael xx
Date: 11/18/2012 6:40:00 AM
Thank you Carma, I appreciate that xx
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Date: 11/18/2012 6:39:00 AM
Very nice write you have here Mandy Tams
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Date: 11/18/2012 6:37:00 AM
What a beautiful love poem. Well done.
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Date: 11/18/2012 6:40:00 AM
Thank you Jon that means a lot to me xx
Date: 11/17/2012 1:49:00 PM
Hi there, thanks for reading my work.
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Date: 11/18/2012 6:41:00 AM
Hi and thanks jancarl xx
Date: 11/17/2012 9:59:00 AM
Thou hast a good poem here.
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Date: 11/17/2012 10:28:00 AM
Why thank you kind sir xx
Date: 11/17/2012 8:02:00 AM
Very nicely written love sonnet Mandy. Beautifully done.Thank you for sharing. Sending smiles, Connie
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Date: 11/17/2012 10:28:00 AM
Thanks Connie, much appreciated xx
Date: 11/16/2012 9:23:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Winning material for sure..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..I hope that all is well with you..Thanks for stopping by ...Sara
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Date: 11/16/2012 1:56:00 AM
Lovely write! I thought I was reading one of Shakespeare sonnets.(lol)I enjoyed your diction so much.
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Date: 11/16/2012 2:08:00 AM
Thank you Modupe, I though I would try something a little different for me, I hope it works xx
Date: 11/15/2012 10:42:00 AM
What a beautiful sonnet. Best to you in the contest, Jancarl
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Date: 11/15/2012 10:50:00 AM
Thank you so much Jancarl I appreciate that xx
Date: 11/15/2012 10:25:00 AM
beautifu sonnet Mandy... best wishes in the contest....love
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Date: 11/15/2012 10:49:00 AM
Thanks Joseph, I appreciate that xx

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