Speaketh Not of Goodbye

My heart doth beat with rapid pounding beats
My breath doth pant in deep and quick hot gasp
To tell you of my love needs no repeats
And to my bosom, close to me, I thee enclasp

Fear not the dark and mist of any season 
Not to compare to summer’s rose that dies
Shining bright the sun, love is the reason
Speak not of grudging nor of sad goodbyes


Our love must come in sips, time is the thief
From love's sweet chalice do thy lips feel burned 
To quench my fill, each sip is sweet but brief
Goodbye shall not besmirch our love I yearn

To hold, to sip and drink your sweet hello
My heart doth beat, each beat is yours you know.


© 15/11/2012

Competition Entry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 7:56 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in Harry's "Goodbye" contest Mandy. I am sorry it is late. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 10:05 AM
Thanks Again Carol love xx
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 5:40 PM
Awesome final line, each beat is yours. I just love that, mandy . Big congrats in Harry's first wonderful contest!!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 1:22 AM
Thanks Andy xx
Carrillo Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 4:40 PM
Great poem of goodbye. Congrts. on your win and thank you for reading mine. Many blessings. Lucilla
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 1:26 AM
Thanks Lucilla xx
Arowolo Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 2:24 PM
Awesome and beautiful piece,Mandy..Congrats on your superb win...And thanks for all your wonderful comments on my works...You are so dear...
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 1:25 AM
Thank you Olsuegun, my comments on your work are well deserved my friend xx
Guzzi Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 8:47 AM
Such progress in your writing! What a wonder you are! fav line [Our love must come in sips] Crongrad's on your win. Light & Love
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 9:15 AM
I will take that as high praise and thank you for it Debbie, I try to learn from the masters, or the mistresses lol. Told you you were cool xx
Nair Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 7:31 AM
Lovely work, Mandy, Congrats!! Jag
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 9:17 AM
Thanks again Jag, much appreciated xx
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November 26, 2012 at 9:23 PM
Mandy, , congratulations ;-) In Harry's "goodbye" contest.. Good night~ PD
May Avatar
November 26, 2012 at 6:47 PM
congrats on a great win Mandy
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 9:16 AM
Thanks Joseph, I appreciate that xx
Roberts Avatar
November 26, 2012 at 5:46 PM
Thee pen a great poem Mistress Mandy. Congrats....Sassy Seren.......
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 9:15 AM
Me thinks thee are a sassy wench xx
Horsman Avatar
November 26, 2012 at 4:41 PM
congrats Mandy on your 3rd place winner in my goodbye sonnet contest..
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 9:15 AM
Thanks harry for placing me xx
Roberts Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 9:53 AM
you've done it again another wonderful poem ...Seren
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 10:46 AM
Thanks Seren, you are a pal xx
Falotico Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 7:28 AM
A love poem to hold... very enjoyed... Happy Thanksgiving to you,, luv Michael
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 7:35 AM
Thanks Michael xx
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November 18, 2012 at 6:40 AM
Thank you Carma, I appreciate that xx
Sanderson Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 6:39 AM
Very nice write you have here Mandy Tams
Cavanaugh Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 6:37 AM
What a beautiful love poem. Well done.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 6:40 AM
Thank you Jon that means a lot to me xx
Campi Avatar
November 17, 2012 at 1:49 PM
Hi there, thanks for reading my work.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 6:41 AM
Hi and thanks jancarl xx
Pettit Avatar
November 17, 2012 at 9:59 AM
Thou hast a good poem here.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 17, 2012 at 10:28 AM
Why thank you kind sir xx
Gildersleeve Avatar
November 17, 2012 at 8:02 AM
Very nicely written love sonnet Mandy. Beautifully done.Thank you for sharing. Sending smiles, Connie
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 17, 2012 at 10:28 AM
Thanks Connie, much appreciated xx
Kendrick Avatar
November 16, 2012 at 9:23 AM
Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Winning material for sure..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..I hope that all is well with you..Thanks for stopping by ...Sara
Sefunmi Avatar
November 16, 2012 at 1:56 AM
Lovely write! I thought I was reading one of Shakespeare sonnets.(lol)I enjoyed your diction so much.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 16, 2012 at 2:08 AM
Thank you Modupe, I though I would try something a little different for me, I hope it works xx
Campi Avatar
November 15, 2012 at 10:42 AM
What a beautiful sonnet. Best to you in the contest, Jancarl
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 15, 2012 at 10:50 AM
Thank you so much Jancarl I appreciate that xx
May Avatar
November 15, 2012 at 10:25 AM
beautifu sonnet Mandy... best wishes in the contest....love
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 15, 2012 at 10:49 AM
Thanks Joseph, I appreciate that xx
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