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Sparkling Scenery

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A soft warm breeze dissipates the mist of early dawn, Beneath a clump of cottonwood, I see a lone fawn, Birds glide above fluffy clouds as the bright sun climbs high, Silvery lake teems with fish as swans and ducks float by. Nature has dressed my home with all its best finery. I get my paints to capture that sparkling scenery.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/2/2021 5:37:00 AM

Do you paint! A lovely scene!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2021 2:26:00 PM

As Jo says below, short and sweet and very very pretty.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/28/2021 12:15:00 AM

Simply lovely! Short and sweet, love the picture you paint with your words, Victor:)

Eve Roper

Date: 3/27/2021 11:10:00 PM

You took out your paints and penned a great picture. Hugs Eve

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/27/2021 6:11:00 PM

Beautifully written. I am so impressed.

Judy Ball

Date: 3/27/2021 4:47:00 PM

Oh yes indeed and if you are like me and unable to draw it grab your camera quick. Great job here,. God Bless, JB

Jan Allison

Date: 3/27/2021 3:57:00 PM

what captivating imagery Victor:-) hugs Jan xx

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/27/2021 12:13:00 PM

The magnificent scenery you described is exactly the kind which should be captured on canvas, making a perfect moment last forever. Wonderful!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/27/2021 9:43:00 AM

Very descriptive of spring scene that one would long to see. Great picture as well. Sara

Mpho Kgaswane

Date: 3/27/2021 9:09:00 AM

Hello Victor, this is a beautiful poem and with a lovely photo that illustrates it. Regards. Mpho

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/27/2021 8:29:00 AM

- Beautiful written, Victor :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/27/2021 6:47:00 AM

Lovely description of the painting. nature soothes the soul

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/27/2021 5:28:00 AM

Beautiful painting you framed with these splendid descriptions, Victor. Excellent write.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/27/2021 3:09:00 AM

Beautiful nature imagery Victor!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/27/2021 2:01:00 AM

Scenes like that are a great inspiration for poets and artists alike. You captured it well Victor. Tom

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/27/2021 12:55:00 AM

Hi Victory, You painted such a lovely picture with words. The descriptions of the early morn were spot on—good contest and imagery. The photo works well with your well-written write. Good job, my friend:-) Alexis