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- Sparkling In the Dark -

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                               Sparkling
                   Christmas balls  decorate 
              our homes  The light symbolizes
            life       and joy         in a dark time
          Some    decorate          with apples or
      gingerbread cookies      And even oranges
     Crystal balls  hanging in the kitchen window
     Or                           you  prefer apples, nuts, 
    cakes and candies             Gold, frankincense          
    and         myrrh              The balls is a symbol
   of our globe                        and the love of God 
    to     the earth     The red hearts are of course
     a symbol     for love                   We decorate
      and it    should be       sparkling and much
         Something old         and       some new
           Christmas balls      my mother  had
             bought     in             her youth
                 Memories,              happy
                    memories     Tradition
                             Expectation
                                Silence
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   - 26.11.2016
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Babcock Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 7:01 PM
How beautiful is your picture and poem. Love it. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
December 2, 2016 at 3:03 AM
- Phyllis, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Grasso Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 11:06 AM
How beautiful! Congratulations, Sunshine! ...Fran
Andresen Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 11:34 AM
- Thank you for Congratulation, Francis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 11:29 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win Hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 8:05 AM
- Thank you for Congratulation, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 3:47 PM
OH OH OH OH!!!!!!!!!! How delightful! I LOVED THIS POEM. I'm going to fav it right away!!! I loved the shape...the content...just so cheery. I needed this. Hugs
Andresen Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 8:03 AM
- Thanks Eileen for the nice visit, "fav" and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hauser  Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 6:47 AM
Beautiful!
Andresen Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 8:02 AM
- Mike, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 12:48 AM
Excellent. Very creative with lovely words. Nice poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Andresen Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 8:02 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 3:29 PM
a sparkling beautifully crafted pen anne lise wishing you a blessing of a day pal
Andresen Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 2:31 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rycroft Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 1:54 PM
An Exceptional poem how very clever and lovely x very beautiful as well x
Andresen Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 2:46 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Wendy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 12:57 PM
your creativity sparkles Anne Lise I have never tried a shape poem - you really do inspire me to try one day:-) hugs Jan xx7
Andresen Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 1:37 PM
- Never tried (?)... then you must try (!) ... much fun and lot of work :))) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leake Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 12:22 PM
What a lovely piece anne, And a special shape poem for Christmas time, Enjoyed this. Best Wishes Kevin
Andresen Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 1:34 PM
- Glad you enjoy it, nice to share with you Kevin :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Grace Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 11:02 AM
Shape poems are one of the most difficult to do and I am so impressed by this one by you. You have inspired me to do one too...... Soon (?)
Andresen Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 1:32 PM
- Let me know when you have posted it, Janet :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Y. Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 10:36 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, This is such a beautiful creative write. Nice shape. Well done. A Big seven:-) Alexis
Andresen Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 1:31 PM
- Thanks Alexis for the nice visit a big 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 9:23 AM
Another wonderful creation with a beautiful verse :-) I love it . Thank you for the treat Hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 1:30 PM
- Thank you for the nice visit and lovely comments, Eve :) - I wait for your next :)) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 5:24 AM
Fantastic in shape and content dearest, Anne-Lise! It has brought the Christmas spirit in me! A seven!
Andresen Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 6:52 AM
- Thanks Demetrios for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wanter Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 7:24 PM
Very clever and full of holiday spirit!
Andresen Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 6:51 AM
- Sunlite, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 6:47 PM
So creative and beautiful, I can see cutting this out and hanging it on my tree!
Andresen Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 6:51 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 6:44 PM
how you sparkle with this delightful shape and poem, anne... i've been feeling the glow of christmas weeks ago.. my tree has been up 1st week of november.. happy hugggs
Andresen Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 6:50 AM
- Thanks Nette, for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bauer Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 6:39 PM
wow, you've done an amazing job of making this shape, anne lise! i'm impressed...
Andresen Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 6:50 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 5:41 PM
A lovely gift to get us in the Christmas spirit Anne-Lise. A real work of art! ; ) 7
Andresen Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 6:49 AM
- Connie, thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 4:54 PM
Amazing A-L...I really love it
Andresen Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 6:49 AM
- Tim, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 4:52 PM
Really neat poem with the design and words put together so nicely like this. I enjoyed it :)
Andresen Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 6:48 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 4:35 PM
Great design and poetry to fill it in..These are not so easy but you have done a very good one..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
Andresen Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 6:48 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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