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Sparkle

Sara Sparkle thats your name i saw you dance in a street called Main

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Robin L. Gass

Date: 9/15/2009 10:29:00 AM

This is a lovely and light hearted write, John, and a lovely dedication, too! I see you have been quite busy, my friend. Love, Robin

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/15/2009 6:26:00 AM

Sara is my mom, I hope you are not being disrespectful to her, I know you would not do that.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/15/2009 12:58:00 AM

Yes Sara does sparkle and you do too,two of my fav poets-well penned John--Charma

Sabrina Huggins

Date: 9/14/2009 5:16:00 PM

I like it so much! Made my day. How do you do soupmail and thanks for the comments

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/14/2009 4:48:00 PM

I'll give you a hint. It is in the "Bible". But mine is in French. Sara P.S. It is my bed time. Early to bed and early to rise makes one healthy, wealthy, and wise. I don't know where Ben got that one. Early to bed and early to rise and your girl goes out with other guys.

P Sheart

Date: 9/14/2009 4:45:00 PM

Hi John You made my heart smile with this one. Ah, those good old memories! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/14/2009 4:33:00 PM

I did dance on Main street one time years ago. However, Sparkle is not it. Sparkle would be a very good name though. Sara

Madeleine Mclaughlin

Date: 9/14/2009 4:31:00 PM

so cute, it needs a little drawing to go with it.