Spark Through the Sunset

Her feet dangled down
Above the mud
Her body safe, sitting on the stone wall,
Waiting

She knew her daddy was going to come
He never said he would,
But she knew, she believed
And so she waited, knowingly

The sun set and rose
And still he had not come.
The birds flew across the muddy sky
But still she believed

There were no ifs
No hesitation
Whatever happened would be for the better.
And so she waited

Smiling under the dreary day
And singing with the tumble of the rain
He would come
She simply had to wait.

As the sun rose once more
Above the foggy ground
Exhausted and weak,
She heard a whistle, low and sweet

At this she jumped 
And ran, smiling and laughing
Through the mud and muck
Not minding the dirt 
the dusty air that whizzed by

There, then she ran into the arms 
That waited for the right day to show up
Watching her waiting
Day and night

The arms that hugged her tight
Full of love and mercy
He kissed her gently on her head.
And began to walk her home
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Andresen Avatar
January 29, 2012 at 5:23 AM
I like this poem alot Put,it is beautiful written.- oxox love Anne-Lise
Brown Avatar
January 4, 2012 at 6:02 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Put. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 10:28 AM
What a beautiful afternoon I am enjoying reading poetry here at PoetrySoup. I am happy to see yours among those which I am able to read this afternoon Maddie. May the sun shine down upon you and bring joy into your life today and always. Love, Carol
Gorelick Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 9:12 AM
How beautiful...I was hoping he would come...seemed like forever...lol...well done. BG
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace