Spanish Dancing

Rumbling in my mind
The song of Arleen Hurtado
Trying to get into a Spanish mood
As I gaze at the flamingo dancer,
Dressed in black flaming wide dress.

Hear her castanets, clicking in rhythm
To the background of classical guitars
And the occasional shouts of Ole`.

Yes I can see her, steel soled shoes 
Tapping on sturdy wood. She twirls, 
Her dress inflated in a sensual dance,
Until she enters in a  tocatta festiva.
Silently she taps as she lifts her dress,
Slowly revealing her beautiful legs,
And down again to recommence her twirl.

The audience go mad in applause.
She merely bows and retires to her room.
I’m there waiting for her.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Rhymer Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 5:14 PM
Thank you Victor.Just lovely.
Daniel Avatar
April 30, 2022 at 3:05 AM
Wow! You describe them in such detail, I could see her dancing even before I saw the video, Victor:) brilliant:)
Kendrick Avatar
April 27, 2022 at 11:20 AM
Ahh!! I am guessing imagination the greatest nation on earth. Those flamingo dancers have a style that is pleasing. I enjoyed reading this one today. I was delighted that you visited my page. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 9:23 AM
Ahh, a very lovely description this is. Did you ever see or meet such a dancer. i got to see gypsies dance for us in the caves of small city in Spain. I think it was Granada. Also I got to view flamenco in a Spanish bar in madrid. So much smoke in the air that I woke up with my eyes closed shut. I had forgotten to remove my hard contact lenses the night before. Today I wear soft ones and never have that problem!!
Ricci Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 9:11 AM
Well now Victor - How grand is this. Very. Hi. This is fabulous in every way from the written word by you and the video you shared. Truly. This is tops. You have not lost your touch or creativeness. I will definitely have to return to this again. Have a beautiful night. Entries such as this is why we read Victor. Love and Blessings always
Roper Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 8:45 AM
Great imagery of the dancer, Victor. Blessings my friend
Anaya Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 8:36 AM
I love FLAMENCO...we danced as a group my mother taught a little. Lovely poem and fantasy Victor, thank you for the video! :) A Fav
Skelly Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 4:31 AM
What a nice surprise to see flamenco, nicely done Victor...Delice
Seeker Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 2:39 AM
Hahaha! You’re there waiting for her! Bravo!
Poet Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 5:49 PM
Victor, the depiction of the black flame garment is really fantastic. I had a great time imagining this narrative since you brought it to life with your amazing use of language. And such a great conclusion!
Buehler Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 12:14 PM
Victor, I love this awesome, elegant poem, and also the video of the wonderful dance. This is a fave for me. :)
Deo Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 6:02 AM
U are a great romantic, dishing this sumptuous musical attraction, then surprising us by rushing to the door (to discuss Flamenco and its strange origins & zest) Good poetry as any, anywhere. Kudos (and blessings in Jesus)
Pandit Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 5:47 AM
Loved the music and the dance --as the scene comes alive through your words. Articulate images adorn you poem, Victor.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 3:43 AM
Wow! And the description of a black flaming dress, cool!
George Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 12:55 AM
Indeed mesmerizing performance and you have done full justice to their twirling moves ! Lovely poem, Victor !
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 12:42 AM
I loved visualizing this story as you made it come alive with your excellent choice of words Victor. A perfect ending too! Blessings xxoo
Cunningham Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 12:31 AM
Love to see flamenco dancers perform, full of fire and passion. Even better to have a date with one. Tom
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