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Spanish Dancing

Rumbling in my mind The song of Arleen Hurtado Trying to get into a Spanish mood As I gaze at the flamingo dancer, Dressed in black flaming wide dress. Hear her castanets, clicking in rhythm To the background of classical guitars And the occasional shouts of Ole`. Yes I can see her, steel soled shoes Tapping on sturdy wood. She twirls, Her dress inflated in a sensual dance, Until she enters in a tocatta festiva. Silently she taps as she lifts her dress, Slowly revealing her beautiful legs, And down again to recommence her twirl. The audience go mad in applause. She merely bows and retires to her room. I’m there waiting for her.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 5/3/2022 5:14:00 PM
Thank you Victor.Just lovely.
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Date: 4/30/2022 3:05:00 AM
Wow! You describe them in such detail, I could see her dancing even before I saw the video, Victor:) brilliant:)
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Date: 4/27/2022 11:20:00 AM
Ahh!! I am guessing imagination the greatest nation on earth. Those flamingo dancers have a style that is pleasing. I enjoyed reading this one today. I was delighted that you visited my page. Sara
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Date: 4/26/2022 9:23:00 AM
Ahh, a very lovely description this is. Did you ever see or meet such a dancer. i got to see gypsies dance for us in the caves of small city in Spain. I think it was Granada. Also I got to view flamenco in a Spanish bar in madrid. So much smoke in the air that I woke up with my eyes closed shut. I had forgotten to remove my hard contact lenses the night before. Today I wear soft ones and never have that problem!!
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Date: 4/26/2022 9:11:00 AM
Well now Victor - How grand is this. Very. Hi. This is fabulous in every way from the written word by you and the video you shared. Truly. This is tops. You have not lost your touch or creativeness. I will definitely have to return to this again. Have a beautiful night. Entries such as this is why we read Victor. Love and Blessings always
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Date: 4/26/2022 8:45:00 AM
Great imagery of the dancer, Victor. Blessings my friend
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Date: 4/26/2022 8:36:00 AM
I love FLAMENCO...we danced as a group my mother taught a little. Lovely poem and fantasy Victor, thank you for the video! :) A Fav
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Date: 4/26/2022 4:31:00 AM
What a nice surprise to see flamenco, nicely done Victor...Delice
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Date: 4/26/2022 2:39:00 AM
Hahaha! You’re there waiting for her! Bravo!
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Date: 4/25/2022 5:49:00 PM
Victor, the depiction of the black flame garment is really fantastic. I had a great time imagining this narrative since you brought it to life with your amazing use of language. And such a great conclusion!
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Date: 4/25/2022 12:14:00 PM
Victor, I love this awesome, elegant poem, and also the video of the wonderful dance. This is a fave for me. :)
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Date: 4/25/2022 6:02:00 AM
U are a great romantic, dishing this sumptuous musical attraction, then surprising us by rushing to the door (to discuss Flamenco and its strange origins & zest) Good poetry as any, anywhere. Kudos (and blessings in Jesus)
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Date: 4/25/2022 5:47:00 AM
Loved the music and the dance --as the scene comes alive through your words. Articulate images adorn you poem, Victor.
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Date: 4/25/2022 3:43:00 AM
Wow! And the description of a black flaming dress, cool!
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Date: 4/25/2022 12:55:00 AM
Indeed mesmerizing performance and you have done full justice to their twirling moves ! Lovely poem, Victor !
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Date: 4/25/2022 12:42:00 AM
I loved visualizing this story as you made it come alive with your excellent choice of words Victor. A perfect ending too! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/25/2022 12:31:00 AM
Love to see flamenco dancers perform, full of fire and passion. Even better to have a date with one. Tom
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