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Romeo loved his "kit-and-kaboodle", Kept it clipped like a champion poodle But a glitch in his gland ... Meant the thing would not stand So it hung from his gut like a noodle ... Juliet was as cold as a freezer A limp noodle served only to tease her Without some stiff magic Prognosis seemed tragic ... For her Romeo just couldn't please her!

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Date: 5/18/2020 3:23:00 AM
Limericks are meant to be a bit on the bawdy side, this is funny and bawdy. My entry Wing Lip also referred to a problem down below, like yours was shown the door lol. Tom
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/21/2020 10:33:00 AM
Thank you so much, Tom, I'm pleased you enjoyed my poem - it was a fun write - perhaps TOO much fun for the sponsor's liking, lol?? Blessings, My Friend! :o)
Date: 5/8/2020 6:47:00 PM
haha. VERY cleverly done, Greg. How did I ever miss THIS one!!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/9/2020 3:11:00 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea ... not sure why Janice didn't like it. Oh, well - back to the drawing board! (Maybe considered it "filthy"? I dunno).
Date: 5/6/2020 12:21:00 AM
Very clever, Gregory. Love the title too.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/6/2020 3:29:00 AM
Thanks, Line - I don't do humor very often, but it's fun! Blessings!
Date: 4/29/2020 8:14:00 PM
OMG. I need a bib for this ;D, GIGGLES GALORE!!!!!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/29/2020 10:44:00 PM
Thank you, Mo - I'm so happy you liked it! Blessings! :o) <3

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