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The music played a satie piano piece in each space I day dreamed I am a child again on a swing push pause as I swing push pause as I swing back and forth push then pause a reverie of thoughts higher higher back and forth push and pause the music plays I stay in yesterdays Hear me read my free verse A LABOUR OF LOVE @ http://youtu.be/GiD8JdYi-j w

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Joe Maverick

Date: 4/21/2013 11:18:00 PM

Enjoyed this nostalgic journey Brian, I was looking down old contest entries and saw you gave me a 1st place in one of yours. I thought i'd taken a 4th or so.. I would like to take this opportunity to thank you if i have not already.. Joe..)

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/30/2013 7:26:00 PM

Oh wow!! I love this one, Brian!! I felt myself swinging to the music...back and forth. You are so gifted with your forms....not to mention your beautiful poetry! Happy Easter, by the way!! And good luck with your "Labour of Love"...(I have been back to listen more than once! Each time I get more and more out of it) :)