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Space Between Stars Poetry Contest

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Contest Winner Medal Third Place

"The Space Between Stars Is Not Empty"

subtlest we are ~stuff of star creation of the elements that spawn densest is the space between beginningless origins and endless blurs thus, cosmogony visible vehement impassions blends the invisible spreading hues of mahogany, redshifts dust stripped of mind, blurred... manifested into existence two worlds collide, rich in lust

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 11/19/2024 4:26:00 AM

Anaya, I don't know how I missed seeing all this work of yours. You are indeed a cosmologist and poet. It's all difficult to fathom, but I think your theory of the universe makes more sense than any scientist's. Smiles!

I Am Anaya
Date: 11/28/2024 1:03:00 PM

Ty, Duke! You're too kind, my lovely freind. Smiles back:):)

Crystol Woods

Date: 11/8/2024 10:09:00 AM

It's a riddle, a word puzzle! I love the way your mind works... your intuition and artistic language. I can almost see your words in 3d! Xo

I Am Anaya
Date: 11/8/2024 4:56:00 PM

I'm now looking into it as though a puzzle Crystol and see the fragmentation which fits like a puzzle. Wow, thank you for such a kind comment/compliment. Xhugs ~ Anaya

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/28/2024 10:08:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again. I love the big bright sky by day or by night. Always a pretty sight... Have a wonderful Autumn day with your win.................

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/28/2024 10:38:00 AM

Ty, Paula! Me too xo

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/28/2024 9:46:00 AM

strong opening line with nice internal rhyme; this is a very well written piece, deserving of the contest win..thanks for commenting on my work, much appreciated :)

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/28/2024 10:38:00 AM

Ty! it's hit or miss for me, dear Charlotte, just want to be consistent with good work. Hey, you're welcome!

thriveni c mysore

Date: 10/27/2024 8:36:00 PM

I am reading a different you dear poet. lovely write. beautiful. congratulations on your win. cheers.

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/27/2024 8:53:00 PM

"Stardust" "When Lightning Struck" "Moonwater" I've experimented before, Thriveni....love science stuff. With free verse one can display it in a way that makes it seem more dramatic. I love that! Ty, Cheers! soupmail

David Kavanagh

Date: 10/26/2024 8:24:00 AM

A majestically worded poem Anaya, one that makes a lot of metaphorical sense, nobody really knows what caused this universe to come into existence, yet exist it does, and those redshifts are our major yardsticks for measuring the distance between us and the furthest objects in space, beautifully penned piece, cheers David

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/26/2024 12:22:00 PM

Ty, David, I needed the encouragement and your lovely review, so many great entries in this awesome competition, including you! :)

Jay Narain

Date: 10/25/2024 11:29:00 AM

Beautiful poem. very original, bringing earthly and heavenly vibes.

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/25/2024 5:18:00 PM

Jay, ty and so nice to see you!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/25/2024 11:08:00 AM

WOW!!! I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. What A Great Picture... "Good Luck" Have a blessed Autumn day/weekend writing away...............

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/25/2024 5:19:00 PM

I'm honored, Paula! So nice to see you.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 10/25/2024 10:47:00 AM

Dear Anaya, I think you just bridged the chasm between origin and infinity. I like how you illuminate the paradoxical nature of being through imagery and metaphysical contemplation—simultaneously ephemeral and eternal. Good Luck in the Contest for this is unique and fascinating. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/25/2024 5:22:00 PM

I love your comment, Daniel. Your knowledge of the stars, space, and creation is fascinating! Ty

Brian Davey

Date: 10/24/2024 11:31:00 PM

See now this is amazing, completely original, I like your style as this is the first poem I have read of yours but definitely won't be the last! A++

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/25/2024 10:05:00 AM

Ty Brian! Glad you enjoyed, your review is refreshing, love it. ~Anaya

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/24/2024 6:52:00 PM

A marvellous write of the space between stars Anaya. All the best… Beryl

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/24/2024 7:00:00 PM

Beryl, I took the scientific route, free verse is difficult for me. Looking forward to yours, sweet poetess.