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Space Between Stars

subtlest we are  ~stuff of star
creation of the elements that spawn 
densest is the space
between beginningless origins 
and endless blurs 
thus, cosmogony visible 
vehement impassions
blends the invisible 
spreading hues of mahogany,
redshifts dust
 
stripped of mind, 

blurred...

manifested into existence 
two worlds collide,
rich in lust

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Duke Beaufort Date: 11/19/2024 4:26:00 AM Anaya, I don't know how I missed seeing all this work of yours. You are indeed a cosmologist and poet. It's all difficult to fathom, but I think your theory of the universe makes more sense than any scientist's. Smiles! Login to Reply I Am Anaya Date: 11/28/2024 1:03:00 PM Ty, Duke! You're too kind, my lovely freind. Smiles back:):)

Crystol Woods Date: 11/8/2024 10:09:00 AM It's a riddle, a word puzzle! I love the way your mind works... your intuition and artistic language. I can almost see your words in 3d! Xo Login to Reply I Am Anaya Date: 11/8/2024 4:56:00 PM I'm now looking into it as though a puzzle Crystol and see the fragmentation which fits like a puzzle. Wow, thank you for such a kind comment/compliment. Xhugs ~ Anaya

Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/28/2024 10:08:00 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again. I love the big bright sky by day or by night. Always a pretty sight... Have a wonderful Autumn day with your win................. Login to Reply I Am Anaya Date: 10/28/2024 10:38:00 AM Ty, Paula! Me too xo

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 10/28/2024 9:46:00 AM strong opening line with nice internal rhyme; this is a very well written piece, deserving of the contest win..thanks for commenting on my work, much appreciated :) Login to Reply I Am Anaya Date: 10/28/2024 10:38:00 AM Ty! it's hit or miss for me, dear Charlotte, just want to be consistent with good work. Hey, you're welcome!

thriveni c mysore Date: 10/27/2024 8:36:00 PM I am reading a different you dear poet. lovely write. beautiful. congratulations on your win. cheers. Login to Reply I Am Anaya Date: 10/27/2024 8:53:00 PM "Stardust" "When Lightning Struck" "Moonwater" I've experimented before, Thriveni....love science stuff. With free verse one can display it in a way that makes it seem more dramatic. I love that! Ty, Cheers! soupmail

David Kavanagh Date: 10/26/2024 8:24:00 AM A majestically worded poem Anaya, one that makes a lot of metaphorical sense, nobody really knows what caused this universe to come into existence, yet exist it does, and those redshifts are our major yardsticks for measuring the distance between us and the furthest objects in space, beautifully penned piece, cheers David Login to Reply I Am Anaya Date: 10/26/2024 12:22:00 PM Ty, David, I needed the encouragement and your lovely review, so many great entries in this awesome competition, including you! :)

Jay Narain Date: 10/25/2024 11:29:00 AM Beautiful poem. very original, bringing earthly and heavenly vibes. Login to Reply I Am Anaya Date: 10/25/2024 5:18:00 PM Jay, ty and so nice to see you!

Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/25/2024 11:08:00 AM WOW!!! I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. What A Great Picture... "Good Luck" Have a blessed Autumn day/weekend writing away............... Login to Reply I Am Anaya Date: 10/25/2024 5:19:00 PM I'm honored, Paula! So nice to see you.

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 10/25/2024 10:47:00 AM Dear Anaya, I think you just bridged the chasm between origin and infinity. I like how you illuminate the paradoxical nature of being through imagery and metaphysical contemplation—simultaneously ephemeral and eternal. Good Luck in the Contest for this is unique and fascinating. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Login to Reply I Am Anaya Date: 10/25/2024 5:22:00 PM I love your comment, Daniel. Your knowledge of the stars, space, and creation is fascinating! Ty

Brian Davey Date: 10/24/2024 11:31:00 PM See now this is amazing, completely original, I like your style as this is the first poem I have read of yours but definitely won't be the last! A++ Login to Reply I Am Anaya Date: 10/25/2024 10:05:00 AM Ty Brian! Glad you enjoyed, your review is refreshing, love it. ~Anaya

Beryl Edmonds Date: 10/24/2024 6:52:00 PM A marvellous write of the space between stars Anaya. All the best… Beryl Login to Reply I Am Anaya Date: 10/24/2024 7:00:00 PM Beryl, I took the scientific route, free verse is difficult for me. Looking forward to yours, sweet poetess.