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Time born from ether Before the mind was conscious From infinite space.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/10/2017 10:53:00 AM
Very cool; cosmic food for thought.
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White Wolf
Date: 4/10/2017 7:12:00 PM
Thank you very much, Phil /|\
Date: 3/20/2017 9:25:00 AM
Cool write, WW. Cool contemplations. Good for meditations. A 7 for sure. Love always, bro.
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White Wolf
Date: 4/10/2017 7:11:00 PM
Thank you, RW /|\
Date: 3/18/2017 10:27:00 PM
very cool, White Wolf! When I try to fathom infinity it makes me a bit crazy!
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White Wolf
Date: 3/18/2017 11:55:00 PM
Haha, I know what you mean, Andrea! /|\
Date: 3/16/2017 7:22:00 PM
Hi White Wolf, once again i drop by a Haiku. To me there is nothing like a well thought out, written Haiku and this is just what your Haiku is my friend. You easily capture your concept within this Haiku. An excellent piece. For me this is definitely a seven and a fave. Your friend....Mike.
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White Wolf
Date: 3/16/2017 8:32:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Mike! I tend to steer clear of this form, I find it quite restrictive. /|\
Date: 3/15/2017 5:06:00 PM
fasinating photo, great imiagary in in a few lines , well done ..~*
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White Wolf
Date: 3/15/2017 5:59:00 PM
Thank you, Eve /|\
Date: 3/15/2017 3:27:00 PM
Hello White Wolf. This little entry is intriguing and allows the reader to pause for a second. This was quite the expression. Well done
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White Wolf
Date: 3/15/2017 5:59:00 PM
Thank you very much, Lisa /|\
Date: 3/15/2017 9:22:00 AM
My mind tells me this is a great Haiku, :)
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White Wolf
Date: 3/15/2017 5:57:00 PM
Thank you, Carol /|\
Date: 3/15/2017 7:41:00 AM
A well done Haiku that makes the reader think. :)
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White Wolf
Date: 3/15/2017 5:55:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi /|\
Date: 3/15/2017 7:12:00 AM
That first line drew me in! Very nice!
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White Wolf
Date: 3/15/2017 5:55:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kim /|\
Date: 3/15/2017 6:34:00 AM
Deep, great haiku, different but good :)
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White Wolf
Date: 3/15/2017 5:54:00 PM
Thank you, Duir /|\
Date: 3/15/2017 5:15:00 AM
Starburst, stardust expanding, changing, metamorphosis over eons incalculable! I love it! 7 ; )
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White Wolf
Date: 3/15/2017 5:52:00 PM
Thank you, Connie /|\
Date: 3/15/2017 5:14:00 AM
- Wonderful - Well done, White Wolf - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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White Wolf
Date: 3/15/2017 5:49:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise /|\
Date: 3/15/2017 3:36:00 AM
Brilliantly philosophical dear WW! A seven!
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White Wolf
Date: 3/15/2017 3:40:00 AM
Thank you very much, Demetrios /|\
Date: 3/15/2017 1:56:00 AM
Hey Budgie. : ) I once thought that all we truly have is time. Space has changed, since then, and most would say that time has passed.
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Doug Vinson
Date: 3/15/2017 3:59:00 AM
The Moon knows our secrets.
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White Wolf
Date: 3/15/2017 2:01:00 AM
But neither can exist without the other! The space may change where you are in, as long as you don't change who you are in that space! But then again, space like time changes us too!