Southern Tradition

Southern Tradition

Daddy didn't look at them as they 
passed by
August illuminating unkempt hair 
and
worn-out hand-me-downs
a woman and her four children
walking in the road 
to avoid the sidewalk on our side.

I see her every day
but she doesn't have time
to see me, ebony eyes
too busy watching  babies
crying over the hot asphalt

Daddy spits and shakes his head.
' Too sorry to buy a car!'

Years later a muddy red boot print
graces our front door
A gift from a long grown child
(confident as a ghost who's never 
been seen)
in exchange for the tv  in the trunk
of a car his Mama never had


Daddy spits and shakes his head.
' Well look at where they come from!'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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December 26, 2013 at 12:33 AM
Renee, , Hope you are enjoying the holidays, -- Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"
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December 18, 2013 at 2:43 PM
Renee, enjoyed...,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Lee Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 6:34 PM
Thanks! I'll definitely check out your contest.
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December 18, 2013 at 2:05 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Renee ! - Nice to read your first poem here.:)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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December 18, 2013 at 6:35 PM
Thanks for being the first to welcome me, and for taking the time to read. :)
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