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South West Africa - a Poets Ache

South West Africa What's worse than waking up to a sad reality is never waking up at all, waking to my sad reality leaves me wanting to sleep forever more. At the depths of my heart I dug for the courage in order to say goodbye, as you chose cold as ice, a numbing too nice, not even a decade of love could suffice, So as I move on, dreaming of what could have been, loneliness cannot find me as our son gives me the courage I need, as sad as it may be to say goodbye one last time, I beg you to release us from a country where we can no longer strive, my homeland left it's footprints deep and holds a peace deserving of my child. Where the dunes meet the ocean and the golden sands go far and wide, find it within yourself to let us go and build a life. I am shackled to your tiresome struggle, one that leads you a stray, I am torn in two although my heart remains with you, give your son the life you were deprived of and numb your wounds as you allow him the opportunity to bloom. "A Poets Ache" Sponsored By - Greg Bardon

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Date: 8/7/2018 5:47:00 PM
Luayne, we may have wanted change ... we got it politically. Namib dunes, desert & oceans ... wow! Humans are sometimes still cruel to the ones they love, the nearest & dearest.The LORD has blessed you with a strong son. Glad u are counting your blessings (Forgive the ones who are UNFORGIVABLE, otherwise there is no need to forgive. Right?) The Jesus way is the Resurrected life path, shalom; GODluck
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Date: 10/10/2017 11:31:00 AM
Wow, what an excellent free verse poem.. It is a bit more like prose, but still an excellent reflective write.. Great poetry..
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Luayne Fraser
Date: 3/5/2018 4:57:00 AM
Thank you ***

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