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Sounds of Gray

I hear the low hum of gray As it moves across the sky Forming rain clouds up high As rumbling chants gather to darken the day Then a charcoal hue of thunder breaks the silence Rattling all other colors in its presence The sounds of tambourines play as raindrops fall As drumbeats of platinum echo off the wall Cymbals crash as silver raindrops increase A melody that is sure to shatter the peace As trombones join this symphony of grays While ash gray sounds of thunder play "taps" upon the day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/12/2013 5:08:00 PM
Gray can be a rainy color..Great winning Work..Congrats...Sara
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Date: 12/11/2013 8:27:00 AM
congratulations, Joseph. ..luv Linda
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Date: 12/10/2013 10:02:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Joseph
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Date: 12/10/2013 6:39:00 PM
thank you for my placement Monterey
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Date: 12/10/2013 6:01:00 PM
I love the sound of a thunderstorm..and your gray! Congratulations Joseph
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Date: 12/10/2013 4:09:00 PM
I love all the layered looks of grey in this one. WELL DONE. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 12/10/2013 11:26:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in: "THE SOUND OF COLOR" contest: Sponsored by: Monterey Sirak - Nice to join and nice to read your poem Joseph. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/10/2013 9:12:00 AM
The sounds your gray makes are absolutely musical. Wonderful poem. Congrats and thank you for entering.
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Date: 11/20/2013 11:23:00 AM
I love this poem. All the feelings and images you evoke with color can truly be seen and felt, poetry assisted.
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Date: 11/18/2013 4:25:00 PM
excellently done, dear sir. I LOVE your take on the sound of GRAY!!
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Joseph May
Date: 11/18/2013 10:18:00 PM
thank you Andrea
Date: 11/17/2013 6:27:00 PM
Very very cool! GOOd entry! Light & Love
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Joseph May
Date: 11/18/2013 10:17:00 PM
thank you Debbie
Date: 11/16/2013 7:09:00 PM
grreat tonality and good use of sound to highlight the theme of your verse, joseph.. this is sooo well done!..:) huggs
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Joseph May
Date: 11/16/2013 8:39:00 PM
thank you Nette
Date: 11/16/2013 9:42:00 AM
Perfect description of gray. I thought this contest would be fairly easy..but Im finding it difficult. You aced it. BG
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Joseph May
Date: 11/16/2013 11:02:00 AM
thank you BG...

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