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gazing at waves on a serene seashore… saffron-hued sapphire foam rolling away, I feel ~ an ocean of peace, an ocean of tranquility surrounding me ~ Listening to the strumming sonata of a chartreuse waterfalls descending from a majestic mountaintop, my body shivers, my heart quivers, I feel~ a soothing breeze calm me a blessing from the Omnipotent A song from my past, melancholic and wistful, reverberating in my existence, a feeling of oneness, a halcyon power of charming winds and waves into calmness I feel ~ a pure, unfailing bond with the eternal Soul. October 30, 2021 "S contest - New Poems" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France Theme: Soulful For Strand - 1052 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand FIRST PLACE

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Date: 1/17/2022 2:48:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Mala! Your poem actually makes one feel calmer, peaceful. Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 1/17/2022 4:15:00 AM
I liked this winner. Congrats on it being on the winners' list. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 1/16/2022 7:03:00 AM
Coming back and reading again the poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/9/2021 4:37:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your muse, expounded wisely through your awesome poetic style. God bless you.
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Date: 11/7/2021 10:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with your "Soulful Of Feelings" write. I love this write and pretty picture. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 11/6/2021 5:44:00 AM
Mala, awesome writing and congratulations on your Second Place win in my "S" Contest, like your image also ~ love and serenity_ Constance
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/6/2021 5:58:00 AM
Thanks, Constance. Your topics inspire me to write. I am honoured.
Date: 11/6/2021 4:51:00 AM
Hi Mala, Beautiful, Beautiful, Beautiful. Congratulations on your Win! Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 11/6/2021 5:57:00 AM
Thanks, Paulette
Date: 11/6/2021 3:59:00 AM
Lovely Mala! I love waterfalls! why? I have no no idea! may be it recreates the rhythm of life, may be the sound, or the changing scenery! Your description is very good!! Congrats on your win.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/6/2021 5:57:00 AM
Thanks, Krish.
Date: 11/6/2021 1:43:00 AM
The entire poem is full of peace and tranquility. " A song from my past, melancholic and wistful, reverberating in my existence" - beautiful lines. Great work. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/6/2021 5:56:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj.

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