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Soul Search - Earth

Today, I seek the earth created solid, oh so sure each grain linked to birth, to death, to my clay feet ferrying everywhere life's sublime design. Repost. 17/8/2018.

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Dr. Padmashree R P

Date: 2/15/2024 11:48:00 PM

Choicelessness and randomness of life, are very fragile too. Wonderful

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/29/2018 2:51:00 AM

Wow. That I like. Clay feet and yet feathers of freedom. Many kind wishes, Kai

Aqua Marine
Date: 12/29/2018 1:46:00 PM

Thank you Kai, for your visit and comment! Humans are sublimely "put together.." If only we could value that more, and to respect others too! Kind Regards, AM.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/2/2018 3:25:00 PM

Great lines, especially 'each grain linked to birth' and 'life's sublime design,' well done!

Aqua Marine
Date: 9/24/2018 11:32:00 AM

Thank you for your encouraging comment, Michelle- I love that you have highlighted what you enjoyed in this poem! ( so sorry to have come back so late to reply.) (((HUGS)))

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/27/2018 2:45:00 AM

Enjoyed this piece, Aqua. It's good to feel grounded to something substantial. :) Thank you for your visit to my Be Silent poem. I've been away for a while, but I hope to get back into things soon.

Aqua Marine
Date: 8/29/2018 3:59:00 PM

Your visit and comment much appreciated, Eileen! (I haven't been posting regularly myself...) Your poetry is hugely appreciated and read by many here- many , including myself, would love to see more of your work...thank you for being passionately true to yourself! (Inspiring!)