Soul

The world passes by
Hardly glancing at the hat
Laid casually on the ground.
 I stop
And drop a bill inside.
It floats down in the breeze
And the man plays on
Hardly glancing at the hat
Laid casually on the ground.

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John Heck

November 30, 2008 at 6:15 AM

Tyler - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

Sharon Winter

November 11, 2008 at 8:43 AM

Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

November 3, 2008 at 5:06 AM

Tyler - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 30, 2008 at 6:34 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol

Daver Austin

October 23, 2008 at 4:11 AM

Yep, Tyler, the world doesn't mean much to these guys, these forced eccentrics. There are other ways to make a buck, but they're into a different sort of thing. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver

Sue Mason

October 22, 2008 at 6:24 PM

Love the title here, Tyler! Says a whole lot about our world! Congratulations on your writing being featured this week!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 22, 2008 at 2:38 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

October 22, 2008 at 7:14 AM

Nice flow in this poem. The repetition works well. Congratulatioins on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen