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Sorry For Wasting Your Time

My friends and family wonder thusly On these hours lost to idle rhyme Where such tales and thoughts expressed Seem an affront on precious time. My desire to fixate on every word To produce a work they'll never read Is a joy of love they will never know On what this poet feeds. So I slog away at the words of old To give voice to Nature's faults And if my muse should be so inclined, A sly poem may result. But their interests lie in happenstance And the boisterous views that others take. My frivolous words are a sad refrain Compared to what they fully slake. But in the years ahead... when my dust Lies cold and still beneath the dappled grass. I may live on by the reading of a single verse And with that... my own mortality surpass. The End

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Date: 11/2/2020 4:30:00 PM
Should my heirs ever read my works, they may remember the "idle" hours spent at the computer, and still wonder why. LOL Well-written and thought David. smiles :) Linda
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Date: 6/4/2020 7:37:00 AM
Yes, it is a strange compulsion. Ah to have lived during the time when poets were revered!
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David Mchattie
Date: 6/4/2020 8:59:00 PM
Those days are past my friend. The poets of today produce youtube videos. Such is the state of things. Kind of sad. Have a great day.
Date: 5/31/2020 8:13:00 AM
You have a wonderful talent with words...direct it...Enjoyed the read...
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David Mchattie
Date: 6/1/2020 10:08:00 PM
Thanks Arturo. I don't have your romantic flair but try and stick to what I do best. Have a great day.
Date: 5/26/2020 10:09:00 PM
That last stanza is the poet's salvation, sure... But -- eternal question -- is it really worth anything? As if, we're writing for unborn generations?! … Great substance raised here, David, if not hackles! Cheers, Gershon
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David Mchattie
Date: 5/26/2020 10:25:00 PM
I like to think my great great great grandchildren will stumble on my poetry and for a brief moment, think of me. That's kind of a rush. As for the question, 'Is it worth anything?' Hard to say. Have a great day.
Date: 5/26/2020 4:36:00 PM
Wonderful David,,I wrote a poem similar to this lately.. forgot the name. People prefer to stash toilet paper to poetry. They will sanize every inch of their house, every doorknob rather than read our poetry. Their loss Keep writing...never quit. Panagiota xx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/22/2020 9:48:00 AM
David... I finally read Adam's Curse! I was even able to listen to it at Poem Hunter.com. So true..one sentence can be done and redone. Thanks My friend...really loved it,. Panagiota xx
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David Mchattie
Date: 5/26/2020 10:43:00 PM
There is a poem by Yeats called 'Adam's Curse.' He talks about how people do not understand the work that goes into a poem. "Be thought an idler by the noisy set.' Always liked that poem. Have a great day my friend.

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