Sorrow Potd

oh, with a breath that trembles    tears of sorrow fall      through puddles I walk

9/28/2022


Sponsored by:	JCB Brul
Contest Name:	Empathy

emotionsgriefmonoku

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Anonomus Scorpio

February 28, 2023 at 9:55 AM

Written on the very eve that I decided to join the Soup..... beautiful and belated congrats on POTD for a wonderful piece!!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

October 8, 2022 at 7:48 PM

I'm back with congratulations on POTD, with this awesome creation, Eve. Blessings

Andrea Dietrich

October 4, 2022 at 1:21 PM

ohhh, I really like this one! Congrats on your win

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 4, 2022 at 11:45 AM

- A great line written about empathy - ... congratulations on your win :) -

Kim Rodrigues

October 4, 2022 at 5:57 AM

Even without boots! Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

October 1, 2022 at 10:19 AM

Love how you did your monoku, Eve. Very well done.

Sally Eslinger

September 30, 2022 at 10:51 PM

Eve, so concise, yet “summarizes” one of the most profound experiences a person may realize. Humility opens the door to God”$ touch, which 99% of the time (due to either the gracing of joy or -in this case forgiveness probably for some mistake) Tears would indicate that in response to the trembling soul’s breath, there was a direct touch by God. Glorious penning!xo

Harry Horsman

September 30, 2022 at 9:22 PM

Wow, the perfect Monoku, Eve, broken into the correct syllables as well...Love this. Stay Well My friend. Harry

Eve Roper

September 30, 2022 at 8:44 PM

Thank you, to all. Many blessings to everyone of you.

Brandy Nicole

September 30, 2022 at 6:21 PM

Lately, "through puddles I walk," as emotions flow freely. (true moments in my world). Tears seem to cleanse the heart and the soul. Your thoughts curl softly around me. Congratulations Eve, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy