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Luck of the Draw

At the coffee shop Thumbing through a magazine One photo catches my attention A child’s tearful eyes Reminding me how life is so unfair Tragedy being humankind’s lottery And there’s no questioning The meaning of it all Fighting feelings of helplessness As a single salty tear falls Into my five dollar cappuccino Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~CAFFEINE INFUSION~ 2020 AP: 2nd place 2020 Submitted on August 13, 2018 for CONTEST NO.480 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND and on February 1, 2018 for contest ONE IN FIVE sponsored by JOSEPH MAY

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Date: 2/2/2018 9:35:00 PM
Really enjoyed the perspective you took, it was an intriguing approach that delivered one heck of a punch. A reminder of the horrible truth that while many are doing simple, ordinary things, many others are suffering - surely this hits everyone at one time or another. Now, I say to you - well done! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 2/2/2018 9:58:00 PM
Thanks for your visit, CayCay. Most appreciated.
Date: 2/2/2018 12:51:00 PM
the saddest moments when I had young children was seeing the faces of children that were filled with pain from bad parents and feeling helpless...
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Date: 2/2/2018 7:56:00 PM
What a touching comment. Thanks for sharing, Frederic.
Date: 2/2/2018 8:09:00 AM
Wow, this is so on point, Line and your line "tragedy being humankinds lottery" say it all, great poem, Happy Friday!!
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Date: 2/2/2018 9:07:00 AM
Thank you, Mike. Most appreciated.
Date: 2/1/2018 6:02:00 PM
u captured the moment eloquently Line, nice.
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Date: 2/1/2018 7:48:00 PM
Thanks, Lewis. Much appreciated.

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