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Sorrow

When it rains Tears incessantly falling This is pain Penetrating...I'm dying.

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Tahera Mannan

Date: 7/18/2011 9:30:00 PM

So sad and yet lovely. Many congrats for this win JUn-Jun.

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/18/2011 12:17:00 PM

An emotive write jun-jun.. Congratulations on your win ;-) Wilma

Elaine George

Date: 7/18/2011 10:13:00 AM

Many congrats on your WIN, JUN-JUN. Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/18/2011 9:45:00 AM

Congratulations Jun-Jun on your win in the contest of P.D. "Rain". Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/17/2011 10:55:00 PM

wow na wow, jun..sunny congrats on your special win :) huggs

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/17/2011 8:22:00 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of P.D., jun-jun

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/17/2011 7:27:00 AM

Sad write but such amazing poetry...Congrats my poet friend....Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/17/2011 7:22:00 AM

Congrats jun-jun on your wonderful win for this exquisite entry .. such depth and emotion.. such parallels.. enjoy my friend and thankxx for your sweet comments luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/17/2011 2:29:00 AM

Jun,, Congratulations on your great Rain entry! Thank you for entering your awesome poem about my favorite refreshing gift of life. Also thanks for supporting my contest. Have yourself a great and wonderful night,..p.d

David Williams

Date: 7/17/2011 12:59:00 AM

jun-jun, great poem well done congrats David