Sara Kendrick Poet Sonnet

Sonnet of Worship

I worship you for the plan made for me
From the beginning you knew the tree
The sun, moon, stars nestled at height just right
An atmosphere that surrounds with good light

Through the centuries you knew when to come
To redeem humanity and touch man some
Bringing hope to a lost and dying world
With your teachings, blood, sweat, tears earth did swirl

The guider, comforter, holder of my heart
Omniscience, all knowledge from the very start
Capturing my heart with all that you made
Creating it from your words needed no spade

Exalt my redeemer, friend, comforter
Valentine, my heart is an admirer


(Second attempt at a sonnet.  This is for the "I love you because" contest.)

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Noel Villarosa February 10, 2010 at 12:28 AM This is leading to the right path of life. Glorifying His name is a pure love. A lovely sonnet. (^_^) Noel.

Doris Culverhouse January 26, 2010 at 5:18 AM nice one

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 25, 2010 at 6:47 PM Beautiful entry Sara.. this one should do very well... wonderful inspirational testament of your special faith... luv.. Linda-Marie

James Fraser January 25, 2010 at 2:18 PM Wonderful attempt Sara, you have cracked it >> good luck in the contest >> James

Elaine George January 25, 2010 at 8:49 AM Excellent sonnet, dear Sara. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Lainie

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 25, 2010 at 1:58 AM Sara, You have written this sonnet well. And it is worshipful. Excellent choice for the contest. (Thank you for reading and commenting on my poetry.) Lovingly, Dane Ann

Colleen Bono January 24, 2010 at 2:33 PM Sounds like a winner to me.wanted to say hello and hope all is well with you.

Constance La France January 24, 2010 at 2:32 PM soupmail!

Doris Culverhouse January 24, 2010 at 1:39 PM nicley penned today, hope you are having a good day.

Amber Jenkins January 24, 2010 at 1:34 PM THANKS FOR THE COMMENTS

James Peranteau January 24, 2010 at 1:12 PM I knew that you would change that, great work Sara !!!! james

Michael James January 24, 2010 at 12:20 PM i love ur poem my peom diamonds in the sun i wrote for a girlfriend who died years ago i still miss her very much

Constance La France January 24, 2010 at 11:53 AM aah and not the word "love" used once, good job and great message of admiration and thanks for your comment on my poetry

Daniel Cheeseman January 24, 2010 at 11:48 AM This is a rich and warming write beautiful content, thankyou for your support Daniel

Nicole King January 24, 2010 at 11:23 AM This is a very beautiful loving poem...good luck

Gert W. Knop January 24, 2010 at 8:00 AM Very well written, Sara! Wishing you all of luck for the contest. Keep your pen flowing!..Gert. And thank you for commenting "Cloudless". You were the first commentig it.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 24, 2010 at 7:49 AM Its beautiful Sara but the rules for Matt's contest were no use of the word love anywhere in the poem or title and not to repeat the line of I love u because... don't want to see this beauty disqualified as Matt was quite specific in his guidelines.. maybe u could substitute your word "love" with another and use this same body of the poem... great write ... blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie

Kim Hilliker January 24, 2010 at 7:32 AM Great write. Best of luck in the contest. What a perfect being to write a sonnet about.