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Sonnet Of Worship

I worship you for the plan made for me
From the beginning you knew the tree
The sun, moon, stars nestled at height just right
An atmosphere that surrounds with good light

Through the centuries you knew when to come
To redeem humanity and touch man some
Bringing hope to a lost and dying world
With your teachings, blood, sweat, tears earth did swirl

The guider, comforter, holder of my heart
Omniscience, all knowledge from the very start
Capturing my heart with all that you made
Creating it from your words needed no spade

Exalt my redeemer, friend, comforter
Valentine, my heart is an admirer


(Second attempt at a sonnet.  This is for the "I love you because" contest.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/10/2010 12:28:00 AM
This is leading to the right path of life. Glorifying His name is a pure love. A lovely sonnet. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 1/26/2010 5:18:00 AM
nice one
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Date: 1/25/2010 6:47:00 PM
Beautiful entry Sara.. this one should do very well... wonderful inspirational testament of your special faith... luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/25/2010 2:18:00 PM
Wonderful attempt Sara, you have cracked it >> good luck in the contest >> James
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Date: 1/25/2010 8:49:00 AM
Excellent sonnet, dear Sara. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/25/2010 1:58:00 AM
Sara, You have written this sonnet well. And it is worshipful. Excellent choice for the contest. (Thank you for reading and commenting on my poetry.) Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/24/2010 2:33:00 PM
Sounds like a winner to me.wanted to say hello and hope all is well with you.
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Date: 1/24/2010 2:32:00 PM
soupmail!
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Date: 1/24/2010 1:39:00 PM
nicley penned today, hope you are having a good day.
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Date: 1/24/2010 1:34:00 PM
THANKS FOR THE COMMENTS
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Date: 1/24/2010 1:12:00 PM
I knew that you would change that, great work Sara !!!! james
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Date: 1/24/2010 12:20:00 PM
i love ur poem my peom diamonds in the sun i wrote for a girlfriend who died years ago i still miss her very much
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Date: 1/24/2010 11:53:00 AM
aah and not the word "love" used once, good job and great message of admiration and thanks for your comment on my poetry
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Date: 1/24/2010 11:48:00 AM
This is a rich and warming write beautiful content, thankyou for your support Daniel
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Date: 1/24/2010 11:23:00 AM
This is a very beautiful loving poem...good luck
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Date: 1/24/2010 8:00:00 AM
Very well written, Sara! Wishing you all of luck for the contest. Keep your pen flowing!..Gert. And thank you for commenting "Cloudless". You were the first commentig it.
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Date: 1/24/2010 7:49:00 AM
Its beautiful Sara but the rules for Matt's contest were no use of the word love anywhere in the poem or title and not to repeat the line of I love u because... don't want to see this beauty disqualified as Matt was quite specific in his guidelines.. maybe u could substitute your word "love" with another and use this same body of the poem... great write ... blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/24/2010 7:32:00 AM
Great write. Best of luck in the contest. What a perfect being to write a sonnet about.
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