M. L. Kiser Poet Sonnet

Sonnet of Trains

The trains of old, were dubbed the “iron horse”; 
newer trains were known as, “bullets”, of course.
Flying past with the speed of light;
they cross the world, both day and night.

Once coal and steam propelled these beasts;
today the beasts are fast, but weak.
Of tin and vinyl, these are made;
of fiberglass and plastic panes.

With electricity, they are now, propelled;
nevertheless, they do not run as well.
No personality, have these new trains;
they’re not pretty; just quite plain.

If only man could see the facts;
He’d not hesitate, to bring, the old trains back.

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Paul Callus May 25, 2015 at 9:23 AM We do not have trains in Malta, but I have had the pleasure of riding on steam ones abroad, and can still smell the smoke and coal. They had a personality of their own! #7 // paul M. L. Kiser May 25, 2015 at 9:28 AM Thank you, they did indeed and it's a wonderful memory.

Skat A May 10, 2015 at 12:08 PM ML, i like the train sonnet. However, I will not trust them. :) skat M. L. Kiser May 13, 2015 at 7:29 PM I do understand why you would not trust them. Today trains just don't have the personality that old steam trains did. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Connie Marcum Wong May 9, 2015 at 7:43 PM I love the enchantment of riding a train, especially the older models. Japan really appreciates and embraces trains of any type. They are celebrated in every manner. I loved the nostalgia your poem brought back to me of the trains of the past. M. L. Kiser May 13, 2015 at 7:30 PM I do love the old steam trains; somehow it just seems like we've evolved into more boring designs. Futuristic styles are not at all attractive to me. Glad you stopped by and thanks.