Sonnet For R

I wouldn't write anything this flowery nowadays, but this was the first poem I ever 
wrote - and the girl I was crazy about was pretty pleased I'd written it...


Your grace and beauty fill besotted eyes,
Enticing endless vowing from my lips,
And trading kisses for as many sighs,
With silken touches from my fingertips.
My true eternal passion knows no bounds, 
I pay you homage, ransoming my soul, 
Adoring every curve and each soft mound, 
Drunk on perfection - yours from head to toe,
Devoted to the temple of your form.
Your gentle lips more lush than any wine,
Dwell in my arms for ever safe and warm.
Unworthy, all I beg of you: be mine.
To be your fool in love I am resigned, 
My dearest love, I pray, be sweet and kind.

For Sara Kendrick's Sonnet Me contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Watt Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 9:54 PM
This is quite a poem to have been your first! A sonnet filled with loving thoughts and excellent form ~ John
Guzzi Avatar
April 13, 2011 at 2:30 PM
Well I say you made a touch down! And you did a real good job with your meter too! Congrad's Light & Love
Mehta Avatar
April 13, 2011 at 6:58 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Sara, jack
Brown Avatar
April 13, 2011 at 5:06 AM
Congratulations for your win Jack in the contest "Sonnet Me" sponsored by Sara Kendrick. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 8:52 PM
Congrats jack on your HM in Sonnet Me contest.. way to go luv.. enjoy..
Freeman Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 6:57 PM
This is a beautifully romantic Sonnet Jack. Congratulations on your success in Sara's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses
George   Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 6:24 PM
Ahhhhh, I bet her heart is still melting. A love sonnet straight from the heart. Many congrats on you win, Jack. Lainie
Kendrick Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 4:16 PM
Thanks for the wonderful sonnet that you entered in my contest..Sara
Neels Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 6:41 AM
I had to laugh at the header to this piece Jack absolutely beautiful Sonnet :-)
Phookan Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 6:15 AM
Enjoyed reading this sonnet Jack.This is an exquisite piece. Best of luck in the contest...Gautami
Foulk Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 6:52 PM
a touching piece and so romantic.
Devonshire Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 3:43 PM
What girl wouldn't be pleased with such a romantic tribute, Jack. If a man wrote such a poem for me, it would be hard not to fall in love with him. Very passionate sonnet in perfect form. Wishing you success in Sara's contest -- but if it's for the contest, be sure to note the contest title on the bottom as per her rules. I've got your back. LOL Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 3:16 PM
The tone and the language reminds me of olden days sonnets, jack
Sweetheart Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 2:51 PM
Elegance plus Jack in this Sonnet so lovely .. appreciate the explanation above to connect to your expressive piece my friend.. good luck in the contest by Sara... touching..
Dietrich Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 2:27 PM
LOVELY love sonnet, I think it was quite wonderful and wow, a first one!!!
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