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Sonnet 13 the Battle of Marston Moor

Five Thousand Men! Blood flowing in the creek, The deadly sweep and ‘whisst!’ of footman’s pike, The cavalry broke through where lines were weak! The smell of grass and loam, a caltrop’s* spike That pushed right through my boot, and left me lame… I’m on my own, now, I cannot keep up! I’ve not a shilling for the boys to claim, Should I on Heav’n’s bright porch today end up! There, buy an ale, for friends, who’ll stop, and smile, For all my friends are dead! (And, soon, I’ll be!) Next rush of Horse, I’ll fight atop a stile** – My count of Roundheads*** will be forty-three! OH, GOD!!! The bowmen now have found their mark! It’s thus! That all good men go down to dark… * caltrop – a four-pointed spike of iron, laid before battles, to lame horses and men ** stile – an arrangement of steps that allows people, but not animals, to climb over a fence *** Roundheads - a nickname for the Parliamentarian Rebels

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Date: 1/19/2019 8:33:00 PM
Congratulations Andrew on your well deserved honors in this contest!
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 1/19/2019 11:10:00 PM
Thank You, Kindly!
Date: 1/19/2019 11:04:00 AM
Andrew, a great descriptive and well written poem that arouses strong emotions. Congratulations on your win!:). Hugs Eve ~`*
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 1/19/2019 2:13:00 PM
Kind of you to say so! I am very fortunate that it placed with SO MANY MARVELOUS POETS who entered. Thank you so much. Glad it reached you.
Date: 1/19/2019 10:00:00 AM
The story behind your sonnet is well told, Andrew. Congratulations on your win!
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 1/19/2019 2:11:00 PM
Thanks! Prince Rupert foolishly attacked with a much smaller force and was overwhelmed by the Parliamentarians. A great loss for the king and the Cavaliers.
Date: 1/1/2019 10:43:00 PM
Andrew, well done, if for the war sonnet contest, best of luck, but I think its great ~
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 1/2/2019 1:11:00 AM
Thank You, Kindly!

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