Song of the Blessed

Skin trophy draped over chandeliers
Champagne corks popping below
Gyrating doves chanting like crows.

Though wounded, it slithers alive
gathering hate for a big fang surprise
venom trumps feathers with a roll of the die. 

Sated by sun and wrecking ball fate
at the bottom of the nest it quietly lay
donning a necklace of blue shattered egg.

Surround the coil with a halo of respect
most victories drown in shallows of brevity
silent rattle is truly the song of the blessed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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April 23, 2018 at 8:35 AM
Great write, Anthony. Enjoyed a ponder through your piece this AM. Like the lion’s roar, the rattle has been heard for how long? how much longer?The blessing indeed can be temporary, eternally relative and feigned.
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March 26, 2018 at 2:49 AM
Love your flavor and phrasing, Anthony - I will be back to read more. I enjoy the dark, crimped edges of your writing, and the wonderfully thoughtful phrasing and metaphor, (something I strive for) ... keep up the great work! :-)
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