Song At Dawn Senryu

midnight begets dawn birds’ eyes flutter at the sun lawn sprinkler goes on 5/3/2022

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Susan Lawrence

Date: 5/5/2022 8:29:00 AM

Panagiota, I remember the lovely sounds of birds in the morning welcoming another day ! And yes the sprinklers too ! Susan :)

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/5/2022 2:38:00 PM

Susan! What a totally great comment. I don’t hear the birds Or the the sprinklers, now, You reminded me, this was a long ago memory when I was a young girl.)) thank you for that gift! Fantastic, Yours, Pangie

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/5/2022 12:26:00 AM

When I used to get up at 04.00 I'd always hear the sweet sound of the dawn chorus in summertime. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/5/2022 7:52:00 AM

Tom, maybe I don’t hear well))), but glad you were working and they serenaded you. How lovely! Thank you for sharing! Yours, Pangie

Eve Roper

Date: 5/5/2022 12:23:00 AM

Birds at my house sing all night. Lovely write, Pangie. Blessings my friend

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/5/2022 7:33:00 AM

How cool!,,not here! I think they have bunk beds and turn in? LOL. At Dawn, they are everywhere. Yours, Pangie

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/4/2022 6:43:00 PM

Very cute!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/5/2022 7:30:00 AM

Thanks, Yours, Pangie

Bill Baker

Date: 5/4/2022 5:03:00 PM

Well written early morning Senryu, Pangie. Every line flowed well. Thanks for sharing, Bill

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/5/2022 7:30:00 AM

Aww, Bill, how welcome your words, hope to be reading you today. Thank you. Yours, Pangie