Notes About The Poem

- Song -

SONG
                                            hushed by
                                              lullaby

                                   Calming voice feels safe
                                  as I touch your soft cheek
                         moonlight seals all your sweet dreams

                          "Song - is absolute for child's sleep"
                                              ***


                                         13.04.2023
                                Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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                                  Pyramids 3- 7 Lines 
                                      Poetry Contest
                              Sponsored by: Joseph May
                                1st place in the contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Peck Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 9:39 AM
So very lovely, Sunshine...a child feeling safe in her mother's song. Congratulations!
Dutta Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 10:01 PM
Very Very Nice. Happy to see you on Top. Blessings
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 3:54 PM
wow, yours is super duper good, Sunshine. Congrats
Gasun Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 4:44 AM
So beautiful and serene my dear poet friend Annelise. Congratulations on your first place win! I love your poem. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs...
George Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 10:27 PM
Soft and soothing like a lullaby. Congratulations Smile on your first place win... ! Love and hugs !
Rodrigues Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 4:32 PM
So soothing! Congratulations, Anne-Lise!
Andresen Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 1:26 PM
- Many thanks for your comment and congratulations, Kim :) - hugs
Volumes Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 2:36 PM
Just let my daughter know that it won, she said to congratulate you too. We both loved it dear Anne-Lise. a beautiful poem. Sincere congratulations for a deeply moving poem filled with love.
Fowler Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 9:57 AM
A sweet song Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your win! :)
Andresen Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 12:41 PM
- Many thanks for your comment and congratulations, Linda :) - hugs
Clarke Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 9:31 AM
Beautiful and serene. Congratulations Sunshine:-)
Andresen Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 12:41 PM
- Many thanks for your comment and congratulations, W J :) - hugs
May Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 9:02 AM
Sweet lullabies and sweet dreams, Lovely write Anne, Congrats on your win
Andresen Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 1:25 PM
- Thank you very much, Joseph :) - hugs
Proxenos Avatar
April 18, 2023 at 12:44 PM
I love singing to my 3 month old grand-daughter who already focuses on her parents and grandparents and gives us a smile, she so wants to talk, but blows bubbles instead. Tonight she was sitting on my son's lap when i phoned and I could hear her gurgling when I sang to her, i am totally besotted by Clara. Your poem is splendid, creative and warm - hugs and blessings my friend, Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 1:24 PM
- How lucky you are to have this little princess ... congratulations, grandma Jenny :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs
Baker Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 5:23 PM
Sweet lullaby, Anne-Lise. Good luck in the contest! Bill
Andresen Avatar
April 18, 2023 at 11:15 AM
- Thank you very much, Bill :) - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 10:38 AM
So sweet, dear
Andresen Avatar
April 18, 2023 at 11:15 AM
- Thank you very much, Andrea :) - hugs
Trifiatis Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 2:20 AM
Heavenly, my dearest, Anne-Lise. Be blessed and hugs xxx
Andresen Avatar
April 18, 2023 at 11:16 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Demetrios :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 2:12 PM
Your "SONG" is a wonderful write/picture. Good Luck. Hugs... Have a great/blessed day.............
Andresen Avatar
April 18, 2023 at 11:17 AM
- Many thanks Paula, for the lovely comment :) - hugs
DiMino Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 6:31 AM
Outstanding, sensitive write and image! A world of loving humanity in so few words. Not easy to do as you have done here. Blessings.
Andresen Avatar
April 18, 2023 at 11:17 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Joe :) - hugs
Cunningham Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 3:06 AM
Nothing more comforting for a child than a sweet lullaby. Good luck in the contest Anne. Have a great weekend. Tom
Andresen Avatar
April 18, 2023 at 11:18 AM
- Tom, many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs
Volumes Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 3:00 AM
Ann-Lise, just came back to read it again, was telling my daughter about it.. Its honestly worth a favorite.
Andresen Avatar
April 18, 2023 at 11:18 AM
:) - thank you, Wendy :) - hugs
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 4:48 PM
Whst can I say? Wonderful
Andresen Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 2:03 AM
- Thank you very much, Maria :) - hugs
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 2:57 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile,i can vision a mother singing this to her baby for sleeping. Hugs. /Darlene/
Andresen Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 2:03 AM
- Thank you very much, Darlene :) - hugs
Volumes Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 2:40 PM
Beautiful Ann_Lise. Just worded perfectly.
Andresen Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 2:02 AM
- Thank you very much, Wendy :) - hugs
Poet Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 1:25 PM
A lovely and well-crafted poem, Anne-Lise. Enjoyed reading this and good luck with the contest.
Andresen Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 2:02 AM
- Thank you very much, Las :) - hugs
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