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Somewhere, Someday

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Somewhere, Someday I dream somewhere, someday we will be On a hill overlooking the sea Waving sorrow and despair bye-bye Somewhere, someday below lustrous sky. Gentle breeze blowing away our cares Bringing back happiness we once shared Utter perfection, so romantic Midway to paradise, wish granted. We'll listen to sea rushing to shore A symphony of the sound waves roar And the squawk of seagulls soaring by Ornamental birds hovering high. We shall stand in awe until sunset To witness sky turning shades of red Then beneath twinkling stars up above We'll celebrate the magic of love. Together we will kneel down and pray In thanks for a pleasurable day A day to treasure our whole lives through Somewhere, someday in a tryst we two. *+*+* 31st August 2022 *+*

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/13/2022 10:14:00 AM

A poetic write, Belle, in which your love is expressed so uniquely and with sparkling brilliance! Phenomenal imagery, as well. Panagiota xx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/13/2022 5:08:00 PM

Thank you Panagiota, truly appreciated… Belle xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/3/2022 2:34:00 AM

Ahh!! So romantic is this one. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Dreams can come true. Sara

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/3/2022 3:11:00 AM

Dreams can come true Sara and I look forward to the day this one of mine does. Thank you.. Belle

Bill Baker

Date: 8/31/2022 4:49:00 PM

A lovely dream place for you and your love, Belle. Hope things get better for your husband soon my friend. Hugs, Bill

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/1/2022 1:56:00 AM

Thank you Bill, we think things are getting better then something else happens, I just wish my husband could get completely well, I’m sure he will eventually, one lives in hope. Bless you dear poetry pal, Belle

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/31/2022 11:38:00 AM

Belle, your poems have such a melancholy expression to them. For some reason, being close to the ocean has almost always made me feel happier. I hope you will be in a better mood very soon. PS: Please check soup mail.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/31/2022 12:26:00 PM

Thank you Sotto, I’m always happy to be by the sea too. My moods do fluctuate, since Alan has been ill when he’s ok then so am I, but when he’s not well I do get very anxious there’s so many things happening it’s scary. Have just read the SoupMail… Belle

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/31/2022 5:13:00 AM

I had many dreams. Now I'm plain sad.

Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/31/2022 11:14:00 AM

Get over it! Tomorrow is another day! Make the most of it! Aloha!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/31/2022 8:18:00 AM

I know you did Victor and that makes me sad too, at least I’ve still got hope that my dreams all come true. Take care… Belle

Jenna Logan

Date: 8/31/2022 2:38:00 AM

Your lines are so wistfully expressed, Belle. The sea has always felt like a healing place for me.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/31/2022 2:53:00 AM

Thank you Jenna, I always found the sea healing too, until we recently had a short seaside break and came back really ill. My husband ended up in hospital, alas it was the dreaded covid… Belle