Somewhere Along Her Hands

' '''''''' ' '' Somewhere a hand is reading out loud a Dickinson, a leather-worn journal recording daily life’s soirees, memorizing rain and shielding little girl’s eyes from the blasting words of the sun. Somehow someone reaches from darkness to drive the shadows that meet the body of her child: trembling with excitement or fear, sliding tender fingers on the back; parts the arms like wind that rushes in all seasons to reveal the lush, delicious landscape of summer ; then rubs the elbow down the forearm to greet the cheeks with a kiss and watches while the hands move back without help or guidance from the daughter sleeping. ~ Somewhere a mother, grandmother, godmother, stepmother, or mother nature weeps over love’s broken child; uses her hair to bandage the wound on the youth’s head …unfolds her hands from prayer to widen the window of angel psalms pressing her lips into alleys of the sapling’s mouth: a tear transforms her from receiving to giving. .. and she feels without seeing the last light of the night; lit for those who witness its final extinguishing. © ........ .... ........ *with love to my Mom who had passed on* Gautami Phookan's Poet lll Contest by nette onclaud
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Guzzi Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 4:58 PM
A #1 for me nette dear Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 10:38 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful tribute to your mom Nette
Mehta Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 9:35 AM
A great tribute paid to your mom with touching emotions, nette. congrats
Yvonne Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 8:53 AM
A very touching sad poem. Congratulations Nette on your win.
Allison Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 8:40 AM
a wonderful tribute to your mum Nette. Many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xxxx
Phookan Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 7:31 AM
Beautiful words and expressions! Congrats nette on a your fine win in my contest with this touching tribute to you mom. Love you dear.. huggs
Merryman Avatar
April 6, 2012 at 11:43 AM
You have a wonderful way with words, Nette. This is a lovely tribute to your mother. Congrats on your win! Love, kim
Brown Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 6:35 AM
A belated congratulations to you for your win in P.D's "Mothers day" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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April 3, 2012 at 9:57 PM
NETTE, Congratulations with your beautiful and heart touching mother'' poem. thank you for supporting my contest*. Have yourself a good night. It was an honor having your poem in my contest, luv~PD
Sweetheart Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 9:06 PM
congrats Nette luv on an impressive write and win for Mother contest.. a superior piecre of elegant poetry .. sensational sweets..
Johnson Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 8:52 PM
Amazingly written Nette, Your pen never drys up. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Taylor Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 7:38 PM
Congrats on your win, nette. Beautiful tribute. Nice going, my friend. luv and hugs, Ralphie
Merryman Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 5:56 PM
Congrats on your win with this lovely poem, Nette! Love, Kim
Puddifoot Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 5:09 PM
goodness nette, there is so much contained within this poem, I can't quote my fave lines as there are too many! congrats on a great win :-)
Arno Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 5:00 PM
Congratulations on a fantastic write! Jon
Sweetheart Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 1:22 PM
congrats Nette luv on another brilliant win.. never surprised to see u at the top of winners lists .. words of grandeur and grace always .. sweets..
Brown Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 11:56 AM
Congratulations to you on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Your Own Favorite Poem" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 10:04 AM
I commented on this stirring piece before and I still love it. Rereading doens't grow old. Congratulations Nette
Taylor Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 9:51 AM
Congrats, nette. Outstanding write. Well deserved win. Kudos. Nice going. luv Ralph
Guzzi Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 9:05 AM
Touching piece in so many ways, as energy workers we sometimes wonder if it is 'desirable' to move them on? 'cleanse a room' or 'cleanse a scattered soul' hard choices and ones most have to make whether they are aware of it or not. Congrad's Light & Love
Quigley Avatar
August 31, 2011 at 4:24 PM
This is a very thoughtful piece. Well deserving of your win. Congratulations
Arowolo Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 7:36 PM
Fine master piece ,Nette.Congratulations on your win.you deserve this,keep flying...mate...
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August 29, 2011 at 4:57 PM
Oh my such beautiful words nette.Congrats on your 2nd.place win.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
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August 29, 2011 at 2:14 PM
Reitterating on Constances` comment. Beautiful words flowing throughout your well deserved win blessings and love from Paul
La France Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 12:01 PM
Congratulations, nette on a shared second place win in my contest, your presentations are always so awesome, I have no idea how you do it, but they amaze me, and your words are so elegant.. just beautiful, dear friend~~
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