Somewhere

Whatever was here has gone.
Already the world has filled in
the empty spaces.
Children play on scars.
Traffic noise has overwritten 
the silence.
Nothing remains.

Each poem becomes a hole
in which what has gone
or is going
is kept and kindled for a while,
throwing off a little light
to be anointed with love
and cradled in a hope 
something of it will survive
…..somewhere.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Scott Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 9:02 PM
Absence is an ache only time will fully heal but your words here, Paul, have a poetic reverence for what is missing. I do like the "anointed with love and cradled in a hope" sentiment and agree with DD.
Willason Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 10:12 PM
Thanks Sam for your thoughtful comments...always good to hear that ones words land in the right place. Valued, appreciated. Regards, Paul
Summers Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 6:57 PM
This is one of those poems that get better with each reading. It was great starting my evening here. John
Willason Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 10:08 PM
Thanks John...honored that the poem was a worthwhile addition to yourevening. Good to hear from John. Regards Paul
Lawless Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 5:55 AM
Yep, bits and pieces of poetic soul scattered about, hinting at a past, adrift on an uncertain future.....
Willason Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 10:03 PM
Appreciate the comments John and for taking the time to linger over the poem...my thanks.
Lane Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 5:51 AM
Something always remains, Paul. Just as a trace, however minuscule, remains of what once was love.
Willason Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 10:00 PM
Thanks Lin. You aiways seem to have a reservoir of wisdom to call upon wten making your comments. Always valued, Paul
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