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I went back to the farm seeking Maggie, only to find that she had gone. Searching for shelter from the storm. Another sad eyed lady, laid low, who foretold of forlorn love, and removed my crown of thorns. As the evening grew and light subdued, though not dark yet, a hard rain began to fall. A black crow sat on a scarecrow playing his tambourine, and all the answers went blowing in the wind. You realized there are no more alibis, you now know the direction home, though born far too late. No longer homesick, you finally untangled it, like a rolling stone, and blamed that simple twist of fate. Queen Mary, still in curls, and flag unfurled, will always remain a friend to you. Your harmonica aches, Just like a woman child breaks, Reminding they're all over now, those baby blues. With hands always busy and feet always swift, You always wished us a joyful heart. You taught us that in love, just as in life: Sometimes you are the artist, and sometimes you are the art. A tribute to Bob Dylan on his birthday the 24th of May.

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Date: 10/12/2019 10:47:00 AM
What a lovely tribute Richard :-) x
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Date: 6/29/2019 6:18:00 PM
A well written tribute ! . I enjoyed this :)
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Date: 6/23/2019 3:19:00 AM
Richard, this part I kept coming back to and re-reading, because of the humor in it, but the absolute truth also. "A black crow sat on a scarecrow playing his tambourine, and all the answers went blowing in the wind." Your imagery is always amazing!
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Date: 5/31/2019 8:44:00 AM
Lovely tribute my friend to a more famous poet...happy birthday to all poets, including you Quoth...^WW^...{*J*}
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Date: 6/14/2019 10:30:00 AM
Winged Warrior, Thanks for the comments. BTW, your poem "Message in a Bottle" is one of my all time favorites. Everyone who has loved or been loved should read it. -Richard
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Date: 5/31/2019 8:44:00 AM
...love the pic too.
Date: 5/30/2019 2:51:00 PM
This is awesome and I love the painting! :)
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Date: 5/30/2019 10:49:00 PM
P.S. Awtry, Thanks for the comment. I'll tell Bob you like his painting. -Richard
Date: 5/28/2019 5:45:00 PM
Hello Quoth The Raven, a lovel tribute to Bob Dylan. Have a nice evening my friend.S6
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Date: 5/29/2019 2:26:00 PM
You are welcome. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 5/29/2019 9:34:00 AM
Thanks for the comment Darlene. -Richard
Date: 5/26/2019 4:59:00 PM
Bob must be god because only gods could get through the iron curtain. And his prophets as well: Sts. Knockin' On Heaven's Door, Like A Rolling Stone, Hurricane) Great tribute to great artist.
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Date: 5/29/2019 9:34:00 AM
Thanks for the comment Kurt. BTW, I want that paper bag something fierce. -Richard
Date: 5/24/2019 11:18:00 PM
He was one of a kind. Lovely tribute to an American icon. Have a great night my friend.
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Date: 5/25/2019 12:02:00 AM
David, Thanks and I wish the same to you. I've been listening to his songs all day. (e.g. Highway 61). I'm so glad that I got this opportunity to wish Bob Dylan a Happy Birthday on a Friday before Memorial Day week-end. -Richard

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