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Sometimes, It Takes Some Time-Song Version

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Sometimes Sometimes... we are born, with big dreams Sometimes... we are born with none Sometimes... the money comes too easy Sometimes... some never have enough Chorus Sometimes... sometimes it takes, some time some day... our dreams may all come true Sometimes... it takes, some time to find the love for you Sometimes... it just takes, some time Sometimes... our hearts, they may be broken Sometimes, we seek out peace and love Sometimes... some words are best unspoken Sometimes... you leave when it's too much Chorus Sometimes... sometimes it takes, some time some day... our dreams may all come true Sometimes... it takes, some time to find the love for you Sometimes... it just takes, some time Bridge Being apart ‘til the storm subsides Sometimes, it just takes, some time a little patience, to unwind the innocence of heart and mind Sometimes, the cards, that we’ve been dealt with Sometimes... they may not be enough Sometimes... we’re anxious, and we worry (too much) Sometimes... we’re blessed, with a very tender touch Chorus Sometimes... sometimes it takes, some time some day... our dreams may all come true Sometimes... it takes, some time to find the love for you Sometimes... it just takes, some time Finale Sometimes, it just takes, some time Sometimes, it just takes, some time John Derek Hamilton Revised September 20,2018 Posted November 09,2018 Music and vocal by Pat Canavan (Toronto) Copyright © John Hamilton | Year Posted 2018

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Date: 11/22/2018 8:13:00 AM
I did today and it's mind-blowing, John:)
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/22/2018 11:40:00 AM
Thanks Jo I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 11/21/2018 8:06:00 AM
Oh! I love the lyrics, very comforting, John:)
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/21/2018 12:33:00 PM
Thanks Jo, glad you liked it, did you hear the music?
Date: 11/19/2018 5:11:00 PM
I am writing this as I listen to your beautiful verses my friend. You have weaved a fantastic creation and this singer does it justice as its truly beautiful and the melody is great. Great, great song my friend, strikes me as a wonderful song, message and fantastic lyrics/music.
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/19/2018 7:23:00 PM
Thanks Robert so glad you liked this, I appreciate the nice comments and feedback.
Date: 11/19/2018 5:00:00 PM
i am entranced by your touching lyrics and pat's rendition, john...one for MTV!...huggs
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/19/2018 7:23:00 PM
Thanks Nette I'm glad you liked it, MTV is that still on? lol
Date: 11/19/2018 3:17:00 PM
Johnny boy...what can I say...I heard it before and now it sounds even better...great stuff...and I'm sure the final cut will be amazing...love & music...^WW^
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/19/2018 7:21:00 PM
Hey WW thanks a lot, I do hope he will see this and record it for real!
Date: 11/19/2018 1:35:00 PM
WOW John you finally did it - sometimes you just have to take the plunge and you did it - absolutely stunning lyrics and vocals I really like his voice, my congrats to you both:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/19/2018 7:21:00 PM
Thanks Jan I'm really glad you liked this!
Date: 11/10/2018 5:55:00 PM
I totally enjoyed this musical production and I thought the catchy melody conveyed the thoughtful and somewhat melancholic mood of your lyrics beautifully, John. Great music and vocals from Pat Canavan and great lyrics by you, John. Your song is already in my head and I’m humming it to myself as I leave these comments for you - a catchy and memorable melody for sure. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/11/2018 8:12:00 AM
Thanks so much Susan, that's all that I was hoping for that this could be a catchy tune, I am happy you enjoyed it, now to get it on the radio...
Date: 11/10/2018 5:44:00 AM
I really enjoyed listening to your song..they did a great job..of course because you wrote real life lyrics that resonate..wonderfully done, John.
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/10/2018 8:01:00 AM
Thanks Vijay!

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