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Why is it that we have so many names for cops? Policeman. Pig. Law Enforcement Officer? Now that ones a real laugh. Who is it? Why is it? How is it? These quasi Nazi Neanderthal’s get to break any law they please? Throwing us in jail... What are we doing? What warped, wasp, principle dictates to us, the populous. What angst allows us to submit? Intellect, the nemesis of all, neither sex, race, creed nor national origin determine it? Yet, too much of it makes ones suitability for law enforcement dubious. Sometimes I wonder... Wouldn’t it be more economically viable amidst this capitalistic crap for the small towns and cities alike to purchase donut franchises and save citizen's cents for the library? Ah, YES! After all, then the politicans and the FORCE Can harasses drop out drop- ins And dip donuts in a more cost-effective manner. Contest: Behind Bars Blue

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Date: 6/21/2011 1:00:00 PM
Crikey, I didn't realise how many contest results I'd missed while co judging with Carolyn - please forgive hasty message - many congrats to you for all your recent wins : )
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Date: 6/21/2011 11:55:00 AM
Loved your take on the contest Debbie. Many congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/21/2011 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/18/2011 11:22:00 AM
Quite a powerful social statement, Deb. Really like this one!! Congrats on your success. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/18/2011 10:29:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on your HM for this superior write in the contest.. enjoy special honor with luv..
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Date: 6/18/2011 10:23:00 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of miranda, debbie
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Date: 8/14/2010 4:28:00 AM
A well deserved win, Deborah
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Date: 7/27/2010 8:26:00 AM
Congrats to you on this winner of an entry! Keep up the creativity. Dan C
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Date: 7/27/2010 7:28:00 AM
Good morning and late congatulations D.G.!!!, enjoyed your poem. Have a good and wonderful day,..p.d.
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Date: 7/26/2010 8:43:00 PM
I call this INTELLECTUAL slamming, Deb. Congtatulations! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/26/2010 8:51:00 AM
Congratulations (Deb) on your win in (Destroyer((Poet's contest "Slam!!! Slam!!! Slam!!! . Love, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2010 6:38:00 PM
love it! Deb!!!! congrats! jimbo
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Date: 7/25/2010 6:04:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your winning poem in P.D.'s contest with this fantastic write.. now enjoy your spot in the winners circle TEACH.. with luv.. pupil
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Date: 1/21/2009 2:49:00 AM
Whilst agreeing with the, obvious, sentiment of this, I wondered if it was good as a poem and I think it is. It borders on performance poetry but there are aspects, like the grouping of sounds ('Nazi Neanderthal’s' for example) that suggests a serious poetical approach. Sopme of the lines seem, at first reading, awkward, such as 'Makes ones suitability for law enforcement dubious.' But then it comes over as comical. A good bit of poetry here!
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Date: 1/20/2009 5:59:00 PM
wow, really like the force in this, you make us understand with consistant words. enjoyed it alot and have a great day. MAIL.
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Date: 1/20/2009 8:36:00 AM
Deborah I read your poem than read your comment and as a matter of fact I have seen them come bearing gifts - First they gave me a nickel then by golly they gave me a dime - In years that is - I really enjoyed this poem it was excellent in its descriptive word choice - You made me smile - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 1/19/2009 7:34:00 PM
You know Deborah....this poem is very assuming in its steroetypes....Not all Cops are donut snarfing jackasses!! Some like danish or pastry...and some like those delicious breakfast pockets with the egg and cheese, you know those ones? They really are quite good LOL = )
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Date: 1/19/2009 5:17:00 PM
awwwww you folks are so funny I thought you all were going to get mad and send out a lynch mob for Me (grin). Never meet I copper that came bareing gifts? have you?
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Date: 1/19/2009 4:38:00 PM
wonderfully done my friend. You are a talented writer.
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Date: 1/19/2009 4:13:00 PM
Brillant observations Ms. Guzzi. What a great sense of humor. Laurie
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