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Sometimes I Feel

Occasionally, I feel sad, as a river that has lost its waters and knows that there there will be no rain ... And not a drop of love... I feel somber, as a sea that was made low tide and that not further will have high tide again ... Nor will there be other loving waves ... I feel dark, as the sun that went out into the night, and there won't have any light ... Who got lost in the mornings, and spread in the pitch ... And became obscure, all alone ... the way, that now I am ...!

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Date: 3/15/2021 5:57:00 AM
ALKAS, This is a deeply moving work. Thanks for review of Summer Heat Wave Howard
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Alkas Poetry
Date: 4/7/2021 11:25:00 AM
Thank you dear Howard, you are welcome ! salute alkas
Date: 3/8/2021 12:43:00 PM
Hello Alakas, you know Alakas we all feel that way at times. Wondering when the aloneness will end. Salute Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/10/2021 10:57:00 AM
HELLO Alakas, yes some day we we find peace in fidelis as company. Salute Darlene dear Alakas.
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Date: 3/9/2021 4:27:00 PM
Loneliness Will end the day we find peace a fidelis company... It is human... salute my dear alkas

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